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On The Auction Block Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/21/12

great

hope that part 3 will be cumming soon

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by digdaddyrich07/22/12

I hope that when he is finished with his plan he owns his mother.

Not just her pussy, but all of her where she is his to do with as he wants, and she accepts that she is her son's sex slave.

Thanks for the good read

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by Anonymous07/22/12

great series

what a great series hope #3 is very soon

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by mexbearlll07/22/12

OH YEAH

Can't wait for part 3,As digdaddyrich says' I hope that when he is finished with his plan he owns his mother !!! Anyone know of more stories like this???

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by 7tony207/23/12

awesome hope 3 is as good as 1and2
she will make a great submissive women to have as love slave

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by bumblegrum07/23/12

Great read

Very nicely put together; can't wait for episode three. Any thoughts about what happens when/if Dad finds out? Lots of potential in this story, and you're doing a great job.

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by Anonymous07/24/12

Amazing as always, and am really liking how this is going so far. Eagerly hoping that you continue this series.

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by tatlocks07/28/12

Great Story

I loved these ones , like the others am waiting to read more.
Very interesting and hot development of many possibilities...love to see what you come up with, thanks.

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by Anonymous08/14/12

Good, very good read

I'm really curious as to how Jason will control Rachel without letting her know who he is. Great potential here! Please write #3 soon (if you can), as #2 was too long in coming (no pun intended - ha ha ha).

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by Bigtam08/14/12

Stunning story

You need to write no.3 this is an incerdiblly erotic story. Well done!!

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by Anonymous08/31/12

:D

We wont more:D

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by Anonymous09/06/12

Want more!

Please tell us what happens to Jason and his mohter. Longing to read further.

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by Anonymous09/23/12

More!!!!

Please write more. Really want to see how this plays out.

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by C_frommn09/29/12

O.K.

You got everyones Attention now Jason needs to Dominate Mom . Become her Master and Cuck Dad. Then move onto getting Mom to Move into his Bed.

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by evertonian10/04/12

More please

What a fantastic story please add a third chapter soon as you have set it up beautifully for it to be continued with the execution of the plan

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by Anonymous10/19/12

terrific!

You real.ly have something here that could lead to many more chapters. Well done...

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by taboo_lover10/25/12

Don't share her...

It was a hot story...I liked it when he forbade her to have sex with everyone else even her own husband, but then you messed it up by saying she can suck everyone's cock and they can all touch her...I like it that shes horny out of her mind but he should torment her like that, he should have punished her after he saw her pleasuring herself with a dildo after he forbade her to have sex...
He should make her horny out of her mind and then send her a message saying seduce your son or something like that, but whatever you do don't cheapen her and don't let her touch anyone but her son, she should be his property and they should def cuckold his father....(and show some shame and reluctance when she finds out it was her son fucking her)
Hope you write a sequel soon...this is a hot story

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by Anonymous10/29/12

next please!

this is a great story please write another part!

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by gadzuchz12/20/12

Fan-orgasmic!

MORE PLEASE! You have a great setup! What are the next set of rules imposed on Mommy? How horny will she make Sonny without knowing he's the one? I can't wait to find out!

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by spbowl01/01/13

don't leave us hanging!!!!

GREAT story, you need to cont. this atleast a final chapter if not not more. you can go some many ways with this.....

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by ctalon01/28/13

Great Story

Waiting for the next chapter.

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by SanctuM03/12/13

please continue

This a great story I hope you continue with more chapters

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by Anonymous04/13/13

more chapters ??????

please do you have any more chapters done this story is so hot there just has to be more

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by Anonymous05/30/13

Next Chapter

When is the next chapter coming out?

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by Anonymous06/02/13

When will you start this thread back up again?l

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by darkdance6906/27/13

Original and Thought Out

Loved the premise, seems a little unrealistic that she will continue to not recognize her own son, mask or not. Hoping for an update soon, I realize it is an older story, but I can hope.

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by Anonymous06/28/13

Update!

I enjoyed reading your story VERY much and hope you will continue the story line soon. THANK YOU!

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by toolman202007/06/13

Come on we're waiting

need to finish this,it's too good to just leave it where it is.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

ok

What's happening next.....come on...you got me hooked.

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by Sex4Lf07/16/13

Next???

You just posted a story at the end of June which means you're still active. Given that, when are you going to continue this story? Please don't be one of those authors who begin a good story thread only to leave their readers hanging. It really sucks when that happens.

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by bigdaddyg12308/17/13

"On The Auction Block Ch. 02:" - Jason and Rachel Anderson - (Son and Mother)

After reading the previous thirty-one reader's comments, I must agree with most of them!! This story has merit, context and content that has and can make it a classic on this site; it is so far established a firm footing of suspense, excitement, an erotic and carnal consummated mother's and son's incestual lover's affair!!!

Jason's mother Rachel has absolutely fallen for her "secret lover's" (not knowing it's her son) sex, aura, body, cock and fucking ministrations. She thinks she still wants other men, but her "secret lover" has squashed that idea and has forbidden her to have any sex with anyone, including her husband/his father! Jason has as her "secret lover" forbidden her from touching, kissing or allowing anyone--including her husband-- to touch her, or kiss her, for any reason whatsoever!!! She is his, his only, as lovers, as her only source for sexual pleasure. He should allow her to, only once a week and for a five minute maximum session, to use a vibrator (he even tells her which one to use); he of course as her "secret lover" still fucks her, periodically and sporadically, keeping her lusting, edgy, wanting him, needing fucked, BUT alas she is TOTALLY FORBIDDEN from being fucked or even touched by any one!!

There are many ways and methods he can have sex with her as her "secret lover", even very riskly in and around her husband, in malls as he texts her through various teasing of patrons and exposing of her scantily and revealing dressed body, in parks, strolls down the streets of non-familiar towns, beaches or bars, etc. Continuing as her "secret lover" he can have her leave the front door unlocked so he can visit and fuck her in her bedroom (as her husband showers and dresses for work),, on the floor of her bedroom late after her husband has gone to bed, and even visit and fuck her early in the kitchen just before his father comes down for breakfast.

Eventually, her "secret lover" texts her that she is to start exposing herself to her son, later allowing her son to feel her up, later still to allow her to give him blowjobs and even allow her to eat her pussy for one hour, rest fifteen minutes and eat her pussy again for one hour, rest another fifteen minutes and eat her pussy for another one hour!!! Some time later, maybe weeks, her "secret lover" texts her that she is to fuck her son in the kitchen as her husband is in the living room, leaving lots of cum running down her legs! Her "secret lover" has her date her son at a nice restaurant (she is to give him a blowjob under the table),and then a movie (she is to give him another blowjob), and later that night she is to fuck her son in her bedroom, maybe on the floor, as her husband sleeps, etc., etc. Through all these exposures and flaunting her scantilly clad body she is to be without bra and panties, with maybe a twelve inch black dildo up her pussy as she walks the mall, in the park, around the house, at the movies and various other venues; and, especially even a wireless remote vibrator that Jason can control, keeping it most of the time at or near the highest speed, late at night as she sleeps near her husband, in the kitchen as they eat breakfast and dinner, as her "secret lover" as she visits all the many venues and areas. My suggestions are not chronologically in order, but I do hope I've given the writer some ideas!.

By this time her husband can no longer accept the fact that his wife will no longer fuck him and he asks for a divorce. Just before the divorce is final she and Jason willingly and on purpose do nature's bidding of procreation and impregnates his mother Rachel; later after the child(ren) is/are born Jason emails his father, Rachel's ex-husband, with the news that the child(ren) is/are fathered by him!!

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by Anonymous08/25/13

Please continue

I would love to read about what happens next. I understand that life can put a hold on things but I would love to Read more about how this story continues if you can make the time to write more. I'm sure I'm not the only one.

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by Anonymous10/10/13

More Please!

One of the best story lines I've read. Please continue!

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by teddybearclub10/18/13

I see how it is

You get us all worked up and wet waiting on another chapter. Please hurry and finish this. I'm excited to see where this all goes.

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by Anonymous11/06/13

Your Audience Awaits........

If you make us wait too long, we might just slip in the house and gang back your mother and then you'd have to look for someone else.........

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by Anonymous11/17/13

Great Story

thank you! I really enjoyed your story and hope you submit more chapters.

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by badgerer7511/24/13

more please.

Just wondering how and when he's going to take open ownership of HIS slut?

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by rightbank01/18/14

Never can understand how the author expects us to believe

that a shy, inexperienced, virgin goes from not knowing even how to approach a woman to a dom who wants to make his mother into a slut and his slave.

How about letting him get some experience and learn to appreciate a woman. How to please her and make love to her? How to understand how the real world is, not the world as seen from a porno flick on the internet?

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by Anonymous02/20/14

More PLEASE

I really enjoyed your story and hope you write more chapters soon.




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by Tootight106/17/14

i dont believe it

there are lots of people in this world, and every one of them are different, but to use your own mother like that, I think the best thing that could have happened was for her to abort her son at birth. I know that's hard, but look at what the kid is doing to her reputation, the family reputation. where did he get this kind of mind?

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by Minerii06/17/14

It is finished !

Hell you don't have to write anymore Big Daddy wrote it for you was wondering if he is such a good writer why don't he write one of his own that is usually the solution instead of trying to screw it up for someone else.

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by garyblue07/05/14

Sorry

Had to downgrade you as it's been two years and the story is unfinished.

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by crow008512/13/14

Nice

I'm a little disappointed, instead of protecting his mother from other men, he gives her the pemission sucking cocks else.
it can go up the panties she left the elevator and even what happens.
I expect another chapter very soon please.

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by Anonymous01/03/15

More please

Like your story. Hopefully there is more to this series :)

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by darkdance6901/03/15

I loved it

Great story and I hope you can return it soon!

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by Anonymous01/07/15

love this story,really hope you keep this one going.

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by Anonymous05/30/15

continue story

Needs a pt 3

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by ErotFan08/17/15

You can't stop here

Are you a sadist!?!?

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by Anonymous10/10/15

author is scum. perhaps if he wrote better stories his life wouldn't be so crappy

bad story....come up with something more original, less hostile to women and not as boring.

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by Anonymous10/18/15

more please

nice build up but definitely needs another chapter.

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