All Comments on 'Logan and Lauren Ch. 13'

Been missing this story thanks for the update those two are just too cute together I'm looking forward to see what happens next please update again soon!!

I dont trust him(tristan) i just dont he to nice, i just dont know something up anyway love the udate needs some drama right now everthing to happy

*rene*

I enjoy all of your stories but this series is my favorite. Thanks for the update. Can't wait to findout what happens next.

It is very hard for me to read this and know they are just in high school but it is a nice story. I just think high school is too young for all the sex (or ANY for that matter) they are having, but what do I know. I do think you are a good writer, though.

I wholeheartedly agree! I honestly have no idea why I started writing this series lol but apparently people liked it and I continued it lol Thanks for reading!

-Bizzy

I don't like Logan and Lauren together. I think the fact that they are supposed to be in high school creeps me out. Something needs to shake up their perfect little world.

Theres something about athletes and first love that is appealing. I agree with the fact that they are young. Would've liked for their romance to pick up in college. But I still really love their chemistry. Keep up the good work and can't for the next chapter.

Teenagers have a lot of sex in high school and college. So anyone not agreeing with the story and the way is being presented is living with blinders to! Good luck, Bizzy!

What Logan and Lauren are doing is what most high school students are doing even more. This would be normal.

For those who seriously think these kids are too young to have sex in high school, mehn are you guys totally in the dark LOL! Even if this is just fiction, we live in a society that consists of 9 year olds, and I do freaking mean NINE years olds having sex parties at their homes after school. Or a teenager having her first child at the age of 12. So I wouldn't be worried about high school students getting busy lol.

Anyway, I love this update!! Go Bizzy, its ya birthday lol! Haha, don't mind my silliness. Love your work!!

Awesome!!

I love the way you write and your approach to the subject matter. Keep up the good work!!!

Have wrote in comments or sent me feedback (emails) that things are too perfect: you just wait! I'd say wait another chapter or two for the drama!

Sex in high school has been going on for a while now. This story sounds like a regular high school romance. Up and down and up again!

Like the story btw!

Honestly high school sex was the best sex I'd ever had lol I actually had a sex life ;/

I died laughing because I watch that movie right before reading this story XD

I have the strong feeling those text messages are going to come back to hurt them...cant wait for the next update.

on the horizon with Tristan or a pregnancy scare or his mom???

I really like this story! At first I just thought it was a high school sex cliche series but it has depth. I'm not too bothered by the fact they're in high school and having sex as well, I never had sex in high school -yes it is possible to do lol, especially when you realize most boys in high school aren't like Logan who actually wants a relationship and not just the sex- but it happens. I think the fact that he wants a relationship too is what's throwing people off. It seems more realistic in college. But hey this is fiction! Keep up the good work Bizzy! ^_^

...said it before, say it again...

"see a story by Bizzy_Bish,

vote 5,

read the story,

wish I could vote 5 again"