All Comments on 'She Creates the Fantasy'

A nice, well-told story; I look forward to seeing where it will lead in subsequent chapters. As a first story, at least under this name, it is really very good.

Thank you for posting.

I thought this was well-written. A couple of typos (eg. "She realized my nipples") but other than that it flowed pretty well. I think there's potential to take this further - the characters could do with more fleshing out, and so on - but it also works quite well as a simple stand-alone short.

All in all, nicely done and happy writing!

Very nice indeed, and I'm hoping there's more story here, but also hoping it keeps the same loving tone.

Great story! I truly hope there is more to cum from this series!

Great writing - keep up the great work!

Very nice story; looking forward to the next installment. Plenty of room for further twists along the way.

Loved the story. Can't wait to see what else she and her cousin have planned for him.

nice writing, good plot and a beautiful fantasy. Like this story expanded.

when a guy goes out like this, he is a perfect for a slave!

Thank you for continuum ping this in a second part!

Looking forward to the continuing story. Already posted, I know. A wise woman understands and uses her husbands sexual turn-ons. Being offended and combative just weakens a relationship. Well worth the read.

That was hot. It would have been hotter of he had been forced to eat his own cum after Amy fucked him.

wonderful lively, almost possible tale.nice plot.

can easily be added to.well done.

I really enjoyed the actual love in the tone of the piece. That the woman actually loves the man and is not using him as a sex slave. It felt more real I think. It sounds like there could be a part two!

Sounds like fun!

Although serving his wife and the female cousin he enjoyed himself.

The story got me excited & fantasizing.

She is guilty of administering drugs, kidnapping, sexual assault, and conspiracy.

Good premise.

But the sex is too quick. Too automatic. Lacks teasing. Lacks dialog about what he wants her to do to him. Lacks edging.

Three stars.

unfinished.

Once the thong is out of his mouth, fuck not saying a word. I would tell her to enjoy herself since I will be leaving when she is done and the divorce papers should t take long. Then you say nothing.. He beat off to some porn. She drugged him, assaulted and had him raped. You can add about 8 more charges minimum plus more if you want to get picky.

I get it, it’s a story but to see so many people think this is great but most of them just fantasize and jerk off.

Interesting premise.

Well written.

Well paced.

Sex not rushed.

Five stars.

Sounds like every male closeted sub's fantasy. Written well. Bit of a formula, tho

For a fantasy, it’s alright but in reality it’s dangerous nonsense.

There’s no safe word, no limits agreed, she drugged him, which is totally unacceptable, she’s brought a third person into their relationship, she’s angry, so she’s not in control and she’s going to use a cock ring multiple times, which can cause long term damage.

Never, ever trust a woman and certainly never tell her your fantasies, you will live to regret it.

Bravo! A wonderful, erotic and fun story! 5 Stars.