Totally a tease seems to really be the most appropriate description for these short chapters. Going crazy waiting for more..goes without saying you've got us hooked... Really nicely done.. Have been checking your page twice a day to see if you've posted.. Write soon..
Daniel is a complete arse and until he shapes up and stops behaving like a Cro-Magnon man,you will receive the low votes(not cos of ur writing though).
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Anonymous07/22/12
really enjoy your work
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Anonymous07/23/12
I Love corny! PLEASE write more. :)
Love this story and the delayed gratification. Can't wait for the next chapter.
arghhhh waiting everyday for the next chapter as if waiting on pins an needles your writing is remarkable by the end of each chapter you leave me breathe less
It reminds me of the ladies' novels that started coming out in the 1920s and 1930s, but with a dash of twenty-first century spice. (Not to many "hardening lengths" to be found between the covers of those books!)
I'm enjoying it richly. Can't wait to see Izzy make a go of her business and meet Daniel on a more even playing field.
I know you said you thought this story was a bit corny, but I am finding it go be just this side of delightful. The characters are quirky and loveable, even Daniel underneath his blustery exterior and Izzy is quickly figuring out how to wrap him around her little finger and he knows it. For some reason I had not started this story, so read all the chapters submitted so far and eagerly await the next one.
I think I was the first person to read this chapter... Which means I'll be waiting the longest for the next.. Started reading your other stories to make the wait easier and just realised you've never actually finished a story... All your stories end abruptly.. Please don't do that to this one... Please.. Please.. That would be maddening..
Love
S
I love your characters, especially how Izzy is growing into a stronger woman with each chapter. Please don't stop writing. I can't wait to see how things develop from here!
you really live up to your name
Totally a tease seems to really be the most appropriate description for these short chapters. Going crazy waiting for more..goes without saying you've got us hooked... Really nicely done.. Have been checking your page twice a day to see if you've posted.. Write soon..
Love
S
Disappointed
2x 1 votes, one straight after the other!
This was one of my favourite chapters of this story, and I'm gutted that it is so disliked:(
Keep it coming
Glad to see Izzy start to stand up for herself. Check the new stories daily for the next chapter.
i think the problem is ..........
Daniel is a complete arse and until he shapes up and stops behaving like a Cro-Magnon man,you will receive the low votes(not cos of ur writing though).
really enjoy your work
I Love corny! PLEASE write more. :)
Love this story and the delayed gratification. Can't wait for the next chapter.
excellent
i am very much enjoying watching these two dance around each other great story
I love this story
Keep up the good work.
loving the storey can't wait for more
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she couldnt lift a hamper really???
Looking forward to the next chapter great story!
true to your name...
arghhhh waiting everyday for the next chapter as if waiting on pins an needles your writing is remarkable by the end of each chapter you leave me breathe less
What a delightful story!
It reminds me of the ladies' novels that started coming out in the 1920s and 1930s, but with a dash of twenty-first century spice. (Not to many "hardening lengths" to be found between the covers of those books!)
I'm enjoying it richly. Can't wait to see Izzy make a go of her business and meet Daniel on a more even playing field.
I know you said you thought this story was a bit corny, but I am finding it go be just this side of delightful. The characters are quirky and loveable, even Daniel underneath his blustery exterior and Izzy is quickly figuring out how to wrap him around her little finger and he knows it. For some reason I had not started this story, so read all the chapters submitted so far and eagerly await the next one.
Five stars.
You write really well,power to you mon ami.
you really live upto your name.
I think I was the first person to read this chapter... Which means I'll be waiting the longest for the next.. Started reading your other stories to make the wait easier and just realised you've never actually finished a story... All your stories end abruptly.. Please don't do that to this one... Please.. Please.. That would be maddening..
Love
S
Loving it
I love your characters, especially how Izzy is growing into a stronger woman with each chapter. Please don't stop writing. I can't wait to see how things develop from here!
cant wait!
i soo can't wait to read the Ch. 08!! :D
Loving it all
And a brilliant 'kick' at the end, too.
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There's a corny tag for this....? o.O?
Corny but sweet .....love it
Dont knock corny. After reading so many books whr the chractere have sex when they barely know each other, they is a nice change of pace.
I am really enjoying this. I like the slow buld up as they get to know each other. But a little more steamy action wont be too out of place.
lol
corny but i love it!!! lol
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