All Comments on 'Big Brother is Watching You'

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OxfordDonOxfordDonover 11 years ago
wonderful

I love the detachment...the voyeurism - fab story!!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
GIVE AN EMPLOYEE ENOUGH INCENTATIVE

and a whole new worker emerges who might even do a little work. TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
#2 THIS STORY IS ONE OF TRUE FICTION

and it may even hit close to home; TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Mischievous

This story shows your fun side. I admire the serious feminist in you, and I am growing to respect the budding advocate, but I like this manifestation of your personality as well.

gatorjohngatorjohnover 11 years ago
Fun, Sexy, Realistic

Nice to see this joyful playful side. Very nice.

Nemo18Nemo18about 11 years ago
Will there be more?

You have to continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
She's a Fringe benefit

That's quite a conundrum Jay has, does he approach her and try to win this beauties heart or does he enjoy the free shows and spend his passion on another lady?

Never knew where you were going with this one cinner, I like that.

Great story

Lrhot777Lrhot777about 10 years ago
Jay

I enjoyed the vivid contrast between the driving forces that Jay has for remaining at his job.

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