by indiglowblue
you continue to tell a really good story. I only wish you posted more often or had longer chapters but that is purely for selfish reasons, I just want more...... For your first story/series I think you are doing a great job. So just keep doing what your doing and I do what I do best, read!
@MizT Thanks for all your feedback. I've figured out how submissions work now and my next story will be updated faster than this one has been. I'm thinking of a sequel....
Love the uniqueness of this story. Plot and characters are excellent. Can't wait to see Ryder busting into hell to rescue Angel.
Is something impersonating Michael? Has he switched sides? Have the eons of responsibility finally driven him insane? Does he believe that what he is doing is in the best interest of the universe as a whole? What is it about Angel that would lead an archangel to betray her instead of protect her? Does he know that she is pregnant? Is it the child that he actually fears? Is Faust telling Angel the truth?
I guess I'll just have to keep reading!
I find the fact that chloroform works on angels just unbelievable, but other than that I was liking it. I'm also a little worried that Michael is corrupt I mean we should be able to trust him right?
Now that you have fans I really hope that you will write soon and don't keep us waiting :)
This story is so imaginative, and I can't wait for a satisfying resolution. Won't you please finish it?
Have read your whole series and thoroughly enjoyed your world so far- love to see this piece completed.