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A Girl from Cheemee Ch. 01

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by jamac102407/26/12

definitely interesting premise....aside from a few misspellings and the odd grammatical error, your writing is fine...hope this is the start of a really good therianthrope story :)

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by MizT07/26/12

Congrats

on your first story/series on Lit. I like this first chapter and am looking forward to chapter 2 to see in which direction you take w/your story next.

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by pooage409/15/12

Keep going

I like it so far, please keep writing, I'm looking forward to a new chapter.

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