All Comments on 'Instantly Aroused'

Nice and HOT !! I think you can really develop a wonderful story here. I got very aroused and can't wait until the next chapter(s). Thanks !

What were you doing?? Were you trying to have a wank whilst typing this? It is far too short, no characterisation of the older woman, no build up to the sex scene, it's not erotic, it's not sexy, and feels like it's written by a horny 14 year old. Must do better!

had it right but they were too nice,it was utter cr** and im really sorry you wasted 2mins of your life typing it, the numbers speak for themselves,look at how many views and then at how many comment and favorites you got its a shame there isnt a hate this button we can click

Can't wait to read more on Jill and her lover.