This story got to me in so many ways that I wish I could vote more than once. The terse way you described the tragedies hitting this guy made me ache for him more than ten sentimental paragraphs would have done. And the dildo-without-lube moment made me laugh while at the same time clenching my butt in sympathy thinking ooouchh - and then suddenly cringing in embarrassment as he is found out. You also handled the incest angle very neatly. And I was so glad he got what he deserved in the end...
I've had thoughts over the years about possibly taking a guy like that. Never had the guts to say it. This story goes and proves that there is always someone out there there, just as turned on by freaky shit as you. Well written and great job. May even have to reread a few times. :)
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Anonymous10/16/15
1-45!
1. Damn!My (damn! my)
2. Some how (Somehow)
3. (-large) king size (king-size) mattress
4. it's plastic (its)
5. down stairs (downstairs)
6. anymore (any more)
7. grand parents (grandparents)
8. old ford (Ford)
9.fire fighters (firefighters)
10. (-a) many a night
11. near by (nearby)
12. some where ( somewhere)
13. Dads (Dad’s)
14. piss ant (pissant)
15. coroners (coroner’s)
16. sisters (sister’s)
17. every thing (everything)
18. my self (myself)
19. watched her slid it (slide)
20. down turned (downturned)
21. Laying (Lying)
22. get use to (used)
23. trobbing (throbbing)
24. bull dike (dyke)
25. your (you’re)
26. over looking (overlooking)
27. it's quite (quiet)
28. hand made (handmade)
29. on socks walked out the kitchen (POORLY EXPRESSED)
30. Hard wood (Hardwood)
31. bare foot (barefoot)
32. sat down (set)
33. he ass (her)
34. Lay down (Lie)
35. stretch out (stretched)
36. It's anything (it’s)
37. What ever (Whatever)
38. leaned down over me and places a gentle kiss (placed)
39. chained to the bed (handcuffed)
40. turned lose (loose)
41. Harder and then (-H) (h)arder
42. grins up and me (at)
43. now you the woman. (you’re)
44. ass hole (asshole)
45. feel bother her hands (both her)
English
just WOW!
easily one of the best stories ive yet had the pleasure of reading on this site!
What a wild ride!
Thanks for such a great read! Makes me recall a line from Oliver Twist, "More Please. May I have more please?"
really good
that was a really good story
Unbelievably hot
This story got to me in so many ways that I wish I could vote more than once. The terse way you described the tragedies hitting this guy made me ache for him more than ten sentimental paragraphs would have done. And the dildo-without-lube moment made me laugh while at the same time clenching my butt in sympathy thinking ooouchh - and then suddenly cringing in embarrassment as he is found out. You also handled the incest angle very neatly. And I was so glad he got what he deserved in the end...
Amazing
I've had thoughts over the years about possibly taking a guy like that. Never had the guts to say it. This story goes and proves that there is always someone out there there, just as turned on by freaky shit as you. Well written and great job. May even have to reread a few times. :)
1-45!
1. Damn!My (damn! my)
2. Some how (Somehow)
3. (-large) king size (king-size) mattress
4. it's plastic (its)
5. down stairs (downstairs)
6. anymore (any more)
7. grand parents (grandparents)
8. old ford (Ford)
9.fire fighters (firefighters)
10. (-a) many a night
11. near by (nearby)
12. some where ( somewhere)
13. Dads (Dad’s)
14. piss ant (pissant)
15. coroners (coroner’s)
16. sisters (sister’s)
17. every thing (everything)
18. my self (myself)
19. watched her slid it (slide)
20. down turned (downturned)
21. Laying (Lying)
22. get use to (used)
23. trobbing (throbbing)
24. bull dike (dyke)
25. your (you’re)
26. over looking (overlooking)
27. it's quite (quiet)
28. hand made (handmade)
29. on socks walked out the kitchen (POORLY EXPRESSED)
30. Hard wood (Hardwood)
31. bare foot (barefoot)
32. sat down (set)
33. he ass (her)
34. Lay down (Lie)
35. stretch out (stretched)
36. It's anything (it’s)
37. What ever (Whatever)
38. leaned down over me and places a gentle kiss (placed)
39. chained to the bed (handcuffed)
40. turned lose (loose)
41. Harder and then (-H) (h)arder
42. grins up and me (at)
43. now you the woman. (you’re)
44. ass hole (asshole)
45. feel bother her hands (both her)
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