All Comments on 'An Unforeseen Moment'

Finally a bit of a different perspective and approach to the subject. -JT

iloved it, really a true version of a white woman getting her black cock that she needs and has dreamed about, i would have never believe how wonderfulthat is 10 yrs ago but now i know and relate to it , the ultimate sex is black cock so deep and wide

Fantastic story. Most of the stories I read with fuck after fuck seem a bit forced, unbelievable even. But you started with it, and continued to the end in a very realistic way. I also liked the way the sexual tension was built on what they were thinking about each other, as well as the purely physical aspects.

One minor quibble:

> Not knowing he had made her cum twice he was never the less pleased with ...

"Nevertheless" is one word. It reads a bit strangely as three words.

Reading it made me blush , and I don't blush that easy

thank you

We read Lit Stories as mental foreplay before the hands on foreplay. I bet she'll be dripping when I first touch her after this story. Great buildup!

This is a story that begs to be add to the favorite list of anyone who enjoys a white woman being taken by a black man. Wonderful!

I really how you take us inside of this lovemaking event. Practically every detail is sculpted for us so that we can actually see what is happening as we read along.

I also really enjoy how both characters are allowed to maintain their dignities. The lovers remained simply human and beautiful in doing so. Top notch job. Look forward to seeing more of your work.

This was a great example of descriptions being hot but not over the top. Could have lived without the "black bastard motherfucker" line, which threw me off in a way that wasn't pleasing, but perhaps I'm too sensitive to that.

All in all, good stuff. I favorited it.

Best line for me: "Her fingers splayed open across him and she saw once again the color contrast; her Irish white skin against the black of his chest and the thoughts of the taboo and the forbidden lusts combined to force another rush of adrenaline through her body."

Great story, well written and a nice 'money shot' not an easy combo.

I like the black MF line it made it visceral, something she'd never say normally, just in the heat of being a black brothers white cum dumpster ... very hot and sensual.

Loved the ending too, i can imagine the aching and dry com stains on her body!

Often when a story gets to the sex too soon or opens with it, it winds up forced and gratuitous. Not this one. An entire story about one lovemaking experience, and it really hit its mark. Correcting a few minor mechanical flaws would be a good idea, but there were very few, and they didn't distract or detract from the story in any way. I usually prefer interracial stories the other direction, but once in a while one comes along from this pespective that is simply riveting. This was one of those. Your use of descriptive language and variety of expression was fantastic, and you drew the reader in as though he or she was experiencing it or at least witnessing it. Great job! Hope to read more from you.

I could almost feel myself right there in his place you must give us more... simply the best

very descriptive writing. i loved it.

This was an exciting read and achieved what it was designed to achieve ,going to read the others when time allows.Thanks

I loved how well written this was. It was highly erotic too and let the reader be right there and imagine everything. Great job, Marie.

Often, when an erotic story starts right at the sex, it falls short. There is a tendency to forgo character development of any kind, which can often leave us wanting more... Nothing wrong with the nameless fuck occasionally, but it builds better, in this editors opinion, when we know a little something of the characters or setting. However, in this case, Mariewriter slipped those details in on us throughout the piece, so it develops nicely indeed. I liked it, found it hot, and right to the point. The anonymous fuck at its finest... Plus I happen to like Interracial :) --

brought back memories of hotel sex (though not all was as good as this of course)

The narration and description was great. I could see the entire story in my mind as I read. Can't wait to read another!

Thanks for the great story. I enjoyed it a lot.

Excellent story Marie....I would love to hear more interracial stories from you.

The author struck many chords that reverberate within those that have ventured down the rode of interracial encounters. Anyone who has experienced interracial lust, love, sex, however it is characterized can feel some of her intense, insightful sensations, conflicts and excitement.

Marie,

You took a story that has been told time and again and made it fresh. Your descriptions of their thoughts was in my mind what sent it over the top. I'd love to hear that same view with her husband on the bed watching the superior black man taking his pasty white wife while he could do nothing but watch her fulfill her lifelong dream of being fucked by a real man. To be ended by the cuck'd hubby having to clean the black man's swimmers from his wives womb. Kudo's Marie.

You took me back 8 years ago when I had this happen to me ;) I felt like I was there, those vivid descriptions made me feel like I was there getting filled up

This story is top drawer in its class, by far the best pure fucking story that I have ever read. It was really hot, so well written, so realistic, I couldn't believe it wasn't just happening. I can't believe that it wasn't written from a real life experience, she could only describe the feeling of being fucked by a cock of that magnitude if she had actually experienced it. A very lucky lady, I will spend the rest of my life craving to be fucked like that.

You present a fantasy better than reality. yumm.

A short, but powerful story. This is the type of thing Lit was made for!

WOW.... Well done.

I agree very powerful story, not just a quickie but you could feel for the characters they felt alive while reading this. Really great writing.

Wow! Talk about cutting to the chase! Intriguing is what I would call it. While not a racist or a bigot in any sense of the words, I've never really been attracted to interracial sex. Many find it taboo indeed, but to me it's just two (or more) individuals doing what comes naturally. But that's just my modest opinion. The writing of the story plays on that taboo I think... with an intelligence hinted at that made me back up and read the story twice to see if I had missed something. Great story, I thought, but I did feel like I had picked it up and missed an earlier and maybe important part of the story. It was pretty well explained towards the end of the story of course, so I got the whole story line in the end. I still can't shake the feeling that this could have been part of a larger story though. Overall... great job!

“Her mind that she considered her greatest sex organ. “ rang many loud bells. Your sensuality is so potent. I do hope this story is based on full personal experience. Thanks for a real sexual hit. I’m alive.

It was a horny fuck fest of great intensity. It made me yearn for a big cock to caress and bring to orgasm and I am male and largely hetero. The hint of racism was a bit destabilising but I understood the context.

Wow, incredibly sexy and imaginatively written

One word. Excellent. I think that although short this is one of the most descriptive,intelligent stories I have read. The mix of thoughts and action is well done. I will have to strive to get anywhere near. Congratulations. A.

excellent...love the abandon !

Powerfully portrayed! Intense and raw emotions were well described. Thanks.

no, i wasn't a dream ...

very well written

What a glorious, well written story!

Well done. Descriptive story of lust and need. He was intent on banging the shit of a white girl he met at a bar. She told him she was married which only increased his desire to bed her. She wanted to experience the prowess of a Blackman. Very erotic story

Truly sensual and primal at the same time, ecstacy of two strangers seeking exactly what the other offered, and achieving it, too. Hot!

If a man can be endowed enough to reach her depths, he should also be considering enough to go easy on her. Women need to feel comfortable so they do not become tense and tighten their vaginal muscles when he enters. If he uses his fingers he risks hurting her with his movements. If he “kisses her softly” she will feel the pliable appendage that is very flexable and wet and soft or hard depending on his experience.