What a twist!
Way to lead the horse to where the water is supposed to be and then BAM. Nice twist.
Keep it up. I love the new twist too.
of another great story from this very capable writer. The surprise at the end of this second chapter just adds to the expectation of good reading in the coming episodes. 5 Stars of course.
But that doesn't mean I like that she became a cheating whore. What's next? We'll see...
Nice twist indeed. I like how this woman is finding a way to take control of her life. Good work Susan. Keep em coming. Tony (in NZ)
Like June I hate that she had to go there, but love the attitude of the lady.
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Interesting
What a twist!
Didn't see that coming
Way to lead the horse to where the water is supposed to be and then BAM. Nice twist.
Great story.
Keep it up. I love the new twist too.
It's got all the earmarks
of another great story from this very capable writer.
The surprise at the end of this second chapter just adds to the expectation of good reading in the coming episodes.
5 Stars of course.
Five Stars
But that doesn't mean I like that she became a cheating whore. What's next?
We'll see...
A coming of age
Nice twist indeed. I like how this woman is finding a way to take control of her life.
Good work Susan. Keep em coming.
Tony (in NZ)
Good start.
Like June I hate that she had to go there, but love the attitude of the lady.
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