I must be too unlettered to see the supposed crap.
Cest la vie
by
Anonymous07/29/12
I liked it too!
I liked the feeling of uninhibited sex between siblings, keep going. I wanted to see more scenarios.
by
Anonymous07/30/12
rushed
it was very rushed and needs a good editing sounds like a plot outline not a story.
by
Anonymous08/25/15
Damn!
What is it with you people and anal. What a turn off and absolutely kills a story. Damn, what a waste. I quit reading your stuff and went on to someone else. Crap!
English
CRAP
CRAP, nothing but CRAP
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WTF was this?
better go back to the drawing board.... this was pretty bad.
I liked it.
I must be too unlettered to see the supposed crap.
Cest la vie
I liked it too!
I liked the feeling of uninhibited sex between siblings, keep going. I wanted to see more scenarios.
rushed
it was very rushed and needs a good editing sounds like a plot outline not a story.
Damn!
What is it with you people and anal. What a turn off and absolutely kills a story. Damn, what a waste. I quit reading your stuff and went on to someone else. Crap!
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