A Night Out to Forget

What typical

racist crap. There's no wife, just a slut not worth thinking about.

PROBLEMS PROBLEMS

and if that house isnt vacant.......adios.....TK U MLJ LV NV

Torch the Bitch - now and fast!

Action plan - change the locks and text back that the stud should keep her because she is damaged goods and not worth taking back. Then ask where to send the divorce papers because only a wimps like MattM or Britease would take this skank back.

CplLkn4fun all this story does

is tell all of us that you are a pathetic loser who hasn't had a real woman in your life in decades. You have no self esteem and gay tendencies. Why would you want to tell all of us this about yourself? We don't care. We don't find your story erotic, exciting, or even slightly interesting... we're NOT interested in YOUR personal problems. We want to read erotic stories that can arrouse US. Posting here is NOT ABOUT YOU!

Wow

Hot story!

Nomore

Divorce her!

Very poorly written..poor structure, poor development, stiff and unoriginal

other than that 1*

only thing hot about this story is he has the picture proof to divorce her for adultry

ok so she is a bbc ho (whore) she can make a living doing thatt and he can prove to the judge she doesnt need support or alimony,

Divorce her based on adutlry and mail the pictures of her committing adultry to everyone you both know including all of her family, this should be done before she is sent home for him to take care of a woman who is mentally incompetent to take care of herself. She has trashed her husband, her marriage, her family, and most of all herself. Nothing to reconcile with she needs to be recycled by now she is on drugs and infected with various diseases. Let Devon keep her, he will keep her for maybe a week before turning her into a lent out used up piece. Always throw out the trash.

This would be her

Last night in the house, get rid of her pronto. It is obvious she made the choice to be a whore.

Racist sick fucked up braindead writer.

Interracial is one thing, racism is another.

Coupled with your idiotic plot and poor ass writing? Well, you have theakings of one shitty story that's not worth the time to read it. Do us all a favor and go back to your night job delivering pizzas.

I can understand now why your bio says nothing about you

I wouldn't want to admit that I wrote this trash either. Where is the erotica? Lit must be awful desperate for new writers to allow the likes of you to submit.

I liked it

Not too bad! Keep it up

great start....

keep going

We want more!

Keep it going, please. The audience, besides the ones calling you racist, wants to read more. More description of the images and more of what happens after.

Stupid

Dumb premise and poor execution and of course no completion. A 1

As they as they

Good story idea but not well written. Should have had others proof read it

No

Txt would be sent to wife not to waste her time to return home since she abandoned him to be someone elses slut.

The brain surgeon husband

Come on get real. His wife has been kidnapped and he has a phone, but somehow he is not able to come up with the idea to call the cops? So instead he waits outside for awhile before going home, not the least bit worried about her safety? Maybe it's a good thing she left him he doesn't sound very bright.