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where is two.? no link.?
OMG
I just fell in love with this story! I can't even!
I hope this isnt the end!!!
Please say you are going to continue this with more chapters!!!!
Beautiful
GoodHeavens,wish.it/were/me
awful
Boring
A very nice story
I loved it :D
this a good start keep it up.?
Good start!
a lot of potential.
Keep it up!
:)
Please write the second half
A bit incoherent but rather sweet. I want to give it a good vote, but I'll wait until you've written the sequel. I really dislike when something with good potential isn't finished, and as a stand alone this scores only average. Hopefully the whole story comes out much higher in rating.
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