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You say "to be continued" . . .
but I'm not sure what else you could add to complete the story. Not that I wouldn't read whatever you might add, what more can be said? You have certainly written a WINNER in this Nude Day Contest entry, regardless that the "judges" didn't grant such an outcome. You remain the BEST!!!
Great story ! I think now that they finally have had sex; you can now focus on what they both like the most and what each of them like as their best personal choice. Then, we can see where they go from here. Thank you :)
A Way with Imagery
Your words are titillating Ms Parker. Loved your story, but do we find out if Jason was fathered by his grandfather??? Does Elizabeth go back to prim & proper, church going Bible thumper? In total, your series was very well written and certainly held my interest. Thank you.
It's a 5!!!!!
Once again, you have outdone yourself Susan.
Worth the wait
Great episode, well worth the wait. great job
You never disappoint...
Like fine wine... your writing just keeps getting better. Keep the stories cumming, and I will keep cumming.....back for more!! Ace
Great As Usual
As always, your story left me wanting more...
Loved every word.....
....of this wonderfully written, decrepit series. You have a gift Susan, and we're the fortunate recipients.
Wonderful
You are an erotic dream cum true. Your words are very well crafted and inviting in a simple yet erotically complex and deep way. I just hope you write even more. Keep up the good work.
Takes my breath away
Your story increases the passion with each chapter. Wow, what a writing talent. Your writing has a quality that easily lends itself to a book. Keep writing. It is so realistic.
You Are A Talent!!
You show such passion, lust, and tension in your writings. Can only imagine and fantasize about your sexual creativity in real life. If you do as you write, I'd love to be your "lover boy" son.
Keep 'em cumming!!
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