This was terrible.. people don't talk like that during sex, and the hair is not a turn on.
A few typos but it reads great
The whole thing was revolting.
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English
Needs a lot of Improvement
This was terrible.. people don't talk like that during sex, and the hair is not a turn on.
Definitely original
A few typos but it reads great
The whole thing was revolting.
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