Out of the Shadows Ch. 05

Nice

Out of the Shadows and into the Sunlight. :)
Glad for the happy ending!!!
Thank you,
M1

OK, but not great

To me this could have been better. It was missing something. But it was okay, I mean not that bad. Next time, get an editor.

well not being an arm chair critic like some that only come on with that in mind.ilove it

well done this was an incredible brilliant story i look forward to reading more of your fantastic stories . do keep them coming . i love a good read . and i promise i wont look for any fault . as i am like you not an author . and further more un afraid to sign in with a name not like some that criticize. and signing as ANONYMOUS and should the cap fit i have left my name should you care to to answer you Mr or Mrs ANONYMOUS , LOVE YOUR STORY MORE PLEASE
LOVED IT.

what a great story, i do hope you write a sequel.

Full Circle

It was nice to see Darius happily married to Cynthia and now expecting a baby, nice little add on. To see all he went through and survived. And in the end he could look back and see where the road went wrong for him and prevent the same thing from happening to his daughter. Now everyone is happy so your story is a success. Thanks for sharing........

Such a great series!!

I so hope that you continue with a second series for the younger generation. I love your story telling and cannot wait for more.

Keep up the great work!!

Military info

I appreciate that you posted at the beginning that you didn't know anything about the military because you were way way off in this story. Well actually you weren't even close but hey, even Hollywood gets it wrong about us military folk. This still was a good story and I enjoyed reading it.