Needs a bit more editing, and there are things that shouldn't have happened that do, just minor things that irk me because there was no mention of the blockage that hindered such things being removed (e.g. her seeing the duct tape in the backpack when she was clearly blindfolded at the beginning and no removal of the blindfold was mentioned).
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Great story
It's okay
Needs a bit more editing, and there are things that shouldn't have happened that do, just minor things that irk me because there was no mention of the blockage that hindered such things being removed (e.g. her seeing the duct tape in the backpack when she was clearly blindfolded at the beginning and no removal of the blindfold was mentioned).
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