I would like to thank Literotica for approving my story; actually my second attempt at submission. As Gemma would agree, I am humbled at achieving this - the highest level of fame that I have reached so far. I anticipate readers' comments and look forward to writing more in the future. Kinds regards from newbie Erotymous. x
This is a nice story, but as it stands is more erotic coupling than romance. I would have liked to see the story longer, with a slower build up to the sex, showing how their relationship developed, and the complications of a relationship between a (not deaf) mute guy and a shy girl.
I really enjoyed your style of writing and loved the story. I would like it longer because i want to read more about the characters. Can't wait to read more of your stories.
I hope you post more to this story
Thank you for your comments. I look forward to writing more, probably with the same characters. Take this as a pilot if I rushed into the sex. On reflection it is a little fast paced but it was a magical, whirlwind day and a deeper attachment shall follow. Yes, you can take Martin to be deaf/mute. My wife noted the flaw as well. I don't want to draw too much attention to the nature of his disability but at the same I hope it creates a deeper insight into the meaning of sensuality. I look forward to exploring this.
fuck story, but not romance
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