Young Woman with Older Man Ch. 04

Good one

Beautiful build up. The characterisation was quite good. Your story is very interesting, only you need to rectify your typo errors. They're a distraction from the lovely story you've plotted. Update soon!

Don't know how she does it

One great sexy 5 star story after another!
But i'm awfully glad she does.

Nicely paced

The dialogue, both internal and spoken, is very believable. Great pacing. Just a few typos and grammar errors; you could make this story flow better with a good editor. This story is one of the few on Lit. that I have anticipated and thought about during the day. Keep up the high quality work. Red.

Love the dialogue!

Such sexy dialogue you write Susan. I adore this series. I just finished the Nude Day Ch. 20. You did a great job with that one also. Just keep up the good work, you are one of my favorites.

You Have a contract out on you!

You cannot, I repeat you cannot stop a story like that and leave me hanging with a set of blue balls!!!!!!. Please have some mercy!!!

Love your style...

...you would be a fascinating person AND woman to know. You have rapidly become my 'go to' author of erotica. Please don't stop!

Terrifically sensual - and playful!

So descriptive

You have an unusual gift of developing the story through exceptional detail and words with feeling.

OMG - Every older man reading this story is eating their heart out. Tomorrow morning its off the the dog park for me. Oh wait, my wife would take a dim view of bringing Lynn home, but she would probably be OK with the dog.

Older Guy with Balls

Wow! You are a master of story development. I love the "step by step" progression. I hope the next chapter is ready. I know I am.

Fantastic - AGAIN

Another GREAT story (so far) - you really know how a man of 56 thinks (me). I have experienced the same feelings & emotions SO many times before. I have seen your pic so I know that you are all female but you can think like a guy (at least you know how "older" guys think & feel).

wonderful...as usual

where do i go to add a another 5 stars?

I agree with Sidney, every older man reading this story MUST be thinking of going to the Dog Park. I am enjoying this story very much, keep up the good work.

Got to Get a Dog!

I'm gonna get myself a dog and hang out at the dog park. This story is every older man's fantasy. Great story. I can't wait to read the next installment.

OH MY GAWD SUSAN!!!!!

Why can't I rate this?

Fantastic!
Definitely has my fantasy approval ;D