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Don't like this dipiction of women
if she wats to be a whore, OK, her decision. Having her be so helpless that she can't take care of herself or her child unless she whores herself out is demeaning.
Whore
So she catches her husband fucking her mother and now she wants to be a top flight escort (whore.) Seems to me the pimp could get more money for her mother.
HA HA HA
HA Ha ha
about time
I'm glad this story is back on the site. It's good but the chapters are too short. I don't particularly agree with the protagonist, but I'm highly entertained and interested of where this new life will take her. Keep up the good work...Q
I like the story
but the chapters do need to be longer or more frequent
Holding My Interest
Really good character development for June in this chapter. Showing her more analytical side moves the story away from a series of fuck scenes to a more believable tale. Again, your recent life experiences and some of the things you have witnessed, have provided a good foundation of believability to the story. June's desperation to find a way to survive and now, because of what we have seen in this chapter, to possibly prosper adds another dimension to the story.
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