All Comments on 'The Prometheus Invasion Ch. 01'

Great start. I am looking forward to reading more. Please keep going.

Not a completely original idea but well done. I will definitely be looking for the next chapter. I do wish the first post has a bit longer. This barely had time to pique my interest.

very well written, i look forward to the next chapter. just 1 small remark:

"37o14'06" N 115o48'40" E" is central china.

neveda is 115o48'40" W ( i know, is just 1 letter, but its a world apart)

The Air Force does not have Corporals. Two stripes is an Airman First Class.

Airforce does not have the rank of corporal, the rank is airman. Try this link for reference: https://www.defense.gov/Resources/Insignias/