Wow, that was truly amazing. That could be your slogan! Totally wrong, and even more so with that "good" in response to her not being on the pill. Damn. Girl this chapter was a triumph. Uhhh. More please!
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Anonymous08/01/12
Seriously, this series kicks so much butt, I don't know how it continuously surprises and excites me.
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Anonymous08/01/12
This chapter is the best chapter in this series, period.
by
Anonymous08/01/12
This series is simply flawless.
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Anonymous08/01/12
Superb characterization!
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Anonymous08/01/12
I liked this a lot. Pretty awesome ending too.
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Anonymous08/01/12
OMG, so freaking good.
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Anonymous08/01/12
I love this series so much and this chapter felt like christmas.
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Anonymous08/01/12
Amazing. I love the interaction with all the characters.
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Anonymous08/01/12
Terrific, terrific story.
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Anonymous08/01/12
Great chapter! Building momentum for some exciting stuff ahead!
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Anonymous08/01/12
A really, really dope chapter (again)!
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Anonymous08/01/12
This is really shaping up to be pure awesomeness.
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Anonymous08/01/12
Wow.
The Max and Jenny storyline is so new, different and interesting.
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Anonymous08/01/12
I am enjoying where this is going.
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Anonymous08/01/12
This series is consistently awesome!
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Anonymous08/01/12
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
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Anonymous08/01/12
This was pure gold and continues my view of Max being my favourite character in the universe.
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Anonymous08/01/12
This gave me shivers from beginning to end.
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Anonymous08/01/12
Very nice. I'm really loving this pairing.
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Anonymous08/01/12
Color me excited!
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Anonymous08/01/12
I absolutely adore this.
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Anonymous08/01/12
Finally read it! Just wanted to restate how great this story is right now. Love it.
Loved it.....
Best so far.....
Hot!
He should take her ass as punishment. :P
O god
Wow, that was truly amazing. That could be your slogan! Totally wrong, and even more so with that "good" in response to her not being on the pill. Damn. Girl this chapter was a triumph. Uhhh. More please!
Seriously, this series kicks so much butt, I don't know how it continuously surprises and excites me.
This chapter is the best chapter in this series, period.
This series is simply flawless.
Superb characterization!
I liked this a lot. Pretty awesome ending too.
OMG, so freaking good.
I love this series so much and this chapter felt like christmas.
Amazing. I love the interaction with all the characters.
Terrific, terrific story.
Great chapter! Building momentum for some exciting stuff ahead!
A really, really dope chapter (again)!
This is really shaping up to be pure awesomeness.
Wow.
The Max and Jenny storyline is so new, different and interesting.
I am enjoying where this is going.
This series is consistently awesome!
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
This was pure gold and continues my view of Max being my favourite character in the universe.
This gave me shivers from beginning to end.
Very nice. I'm really loving this pairing.
Color me excited!
I absolutely adore this.
Finally read it! Just wanted to restate how great this story is right now. Love it.
More!
Just read this chapter for the third time. Uuhhhh. I can't wait for the next chapter. You can't rush art, but dammit I want more!
Please write more
love it love it love it! more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Soon
Hey everyone, I know it's taking awhile but don't worry, I AM still working on this series, it does not end here!
fantastic
well done series with still alot of ways to go......more love your style
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