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Making a Baby

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/30/12

good story but

with no background at all on the characters, we don't know if it really is nonconsensual or play acting.

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by Iread2relax07/30/12

I'm intrigued.

OK, this premise is really captivating. Will you give us background when you continue? You must continue. Please.

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by Anonymous07/31/12

Needs more information, their history? Is this something that they do? or him really taking the choice away from her?

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by Anonymous08/06/12

It was hot!

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by DWornock08/10/12

Sexy

But too short.

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by Anonymous03/25/13

ve vant the

Rest to. Ven the Girl is pregnant and give birth to one off many kids to him. And lots off titt milky.

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by Anonymous07/22/13

I was not happy with this story! He seems to think that making a baby will force her to be his slut for the rest of his life, there is no mention of loving and caring for a child. What does he propose to do, give it up for adoption???

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by Anonymous08/28/13

-_-

The sex was good yet this was a pretty fucked up plot.

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by Anonymous12/26/13

I want a baby

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by KinkyKell120701/22/14

This is really hot! Please make a part 2!

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by marypatmnmwf04/17/14

mary schelske

love to be black bred lik this Mary

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by Anonymous05/13/14

the dudes kinda nuts

I like the sex scenes But the dudes character is kind of off. Idk.

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by Anonymous05/20/14

of course

@ the dudes kinda nuts

Obviously he's nuts thinking that getting her pregnant means "she'd never leave" him.
"He pictured it, his cum sinking into her womb, making a baby, knocking her up. She'd never leave him then."

-ZT

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by Anonymous05/21/15

That was beautiful.

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by Anonymous09/02/15

how about a bloke being made to impregnate his mistress like this

damn that would be hot!

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by Anonymous10/21/16

Rape

Another nasty man the Lady indicated no even though she was sexily excited hence the title

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