Husband's Fantasy Backfires Pt. 05

Why is this in loving wives....................

No love here from her!!!!!!!

On with the show !

The " Mike " part of the story is boring. He is a complete pushover here. Give him a semblance of spirit even if it's futile. Please . You've written some great segments to this story but this isn't one of them. I'll refrain from voting & hope you return to form.

Still one of the best stories on here - despite Jen's drug taking. She's really hooked on big cock, smart girl! Jen with really big tits sounds fucking awesome, can't wait.

Backfires?

At what point does the fantasy backfire? As far as I can tell, he is still along for the ride, and obviously enjoying it. Keep them coming. Thanks for the update.

really?

You perverts get on here reading freaky ads stories to get a quick masturbation session in then you criticize the author for drugs and std's? It's fantasy you a holes... Wow. Such stupid people in this world

What about paying and leaving a tip you didn't mention that... Idiots

Hot

Xleg

Another hot chapter. Personally I like the interplay between Mike & Jen as she tells him about what Darius would do to her.

Some creampie action for Mike would be great....

Cheers,
Kahuna

big ass nigger cocks

Kennyboy82 loves em. As he reads your sick tale of niggers and nigger lovers and pussy boy cuck husbands, he dreams that the big black cock belongs to peteswick and its pounding deep into his faggot asshole. Too bad Hitler never met your ancestors.

geez

The wife has turned into a coke whore,she is doing things for darius she wouldn't for him,and she is thinking of moving in with darius..like what is left?She has abandoned her family,is destroying herself and he is like 'my cock is so hard'....lw stories are misogynistic but this one hits a new high,it is anti woman and anti men,where men are nothing more then a cock with legs.

When does this story end.....

They all need to just get AIDS and die. That would really be the best.

pathetic

a sad and pathetic tale

opened the story and voted 1 star without reading it there is no point in reading racist fucked up shit from this braindead writer. The writer and sicko'as will always get off on this shit.

re: Anonymous-really

I think you forgot to take your medicine today. Calm down, you might avoid a heart attack. lol

very hot

this is the hottest chapter of the series. Jen darius couplng is one of the best you have written. just keep them coming.

there is kennyboy82 again

the sick fuck loved this story i wonder if he is still screwing his dog, about this story how anybody who is human could like your writing is beyond me your just a sick fuck who likes to see people at their worst anyway that how i see it fuck wad.

Absolutely pathetic!!

This story has lost all its charm...... I have always been a big fan of your work.... but this is pathetic!

i thought u were going to introduce the brother in law john into the story with jen. i think that would be a mix to the story as u had set it to where he had a fixation on her in other chapters

Hate It!

Sorry, but I really do hate it.....too sad with her going down the tubes for Darius, and the husband so caught up in his fantasy that he doesn't even see how terrible it all is going...so I really do hate the story, and the characters, and the plot....not trying to be mean....wish I could write, so I respect your ability, but hate your story.....did I mention I really really hate it!

Great story keep it up.

I always find it funny that 90% of the negative comments come from people who keep reading and also have the same name anonmyous. Keep up the good work. I know how frustrating it can be to recieve the negative comments on a stroy. Write what you enjoy and for those of us who enjoy it.

Waaaay hot.

Love how this is going. Well developed characters, and mildly convoluted plot, and lots of kinky sex. Keep on keepin' on. Well done!

@miandev2007

You know how it must be to get negative comments? This author and many like his pathetic ass get off on being ridiculed. They must or they'd put this excrement in the proper hubs. BDSM, fetish, and interracial all fit this story and many more like it better than Loving wives. The scores would improve and there'd be far less comments reminding the writer he wasted his time doing this and should have stuck to masterbating to zoo tube. Disgusting fucking garbage.