A Short Story

editor

very well written...would have been a 5 had it been edited, spoilt it a little.

Excellent

That was a five, hell I'd give you a 8 or ten for that.

fare is money. fair is equal

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I'd like to see more of this if possible make another chapter.

Bravo!

I'll forgive your title pun since this is such a lovely story! Awesome twist on the mother & son theme (I'll never look at that show "Little People" again the same way. Excellently plotted with great description and erotic narrative! Looking forward to your next!

Nice

I liked the story... Thanks

I've always wanted to do a midget...

...for the novelty of it. But, also it is an erotic thought. I haven't seen any other story on Lit. that has broached this subject, so thanks for the fun read.

4**** because you had some spelling errors, some grammatical errors.

Good erotic story.

Nice twist on a slightly taboo subject i.e. little people sex. I enjoyed the hell out of it.

A Short Story

Normally I don't award the highest rating possible, in this case being **5 Stars** on Literotica's Website, I have awarded this story with 5 Stars. As a principle I hold my highest ratings, top-notch, grandest of the grand awards, for blood-related relative's incestual consummations where pregnancy occurs! This time, though no pregnancy has been announced to possibly occur, I felt compelled to give this story 5 Stars because of its earth shattering love between this mother and son. They both deserve the highest accolades possible--the characters, their devotion, their committment, their compassion, their life-forever vow to never leave the other--all culminated to enjoin my heart's warm and passionate wrath to their dedicated life-forever love.

The story has some short comings--so do many celebrities of all endeavors--but eventually they come out on top(Michael Jordan scored 40 points in a playoff game with stomach flu); this story is no different!! The short-comings are not one iota of a gnat's balls versus the effects of the story and its endearing message of love of this mother and son, even without the imagery of pregnancy.

The son has his mother's life now back on the straight and narrow; their show manager is now aware of the need to slow the pace, and mother and son now have the time and ability to enjoy each other, as young, loving lovers do.

The the writer/author, if and when you get wind of my comments--give us a sequel, another chapter of them enjoying life, nice dinners (mom shows a little (NO pun intended) leg, a cruise, a week or two in the mountains in a cabin, a week on a nice beach, all with JUST THE TWO OF THEM. Don't mix these love-birds up with any crows nor vultures!!! This is such a gigantic, lovable story...continue the myrr and awfully nice and elegant love affair for this mother and son!

I find it hard to read a story with a lot of misspellings. Though this has to be the first AGT inspired story. I think doing a midget would be kind of awkward, not my thing at all.

English

There are countless mistakes in this. Drove me nuts

Homonyms: Words that alike, but have entirely different meanings.

This is a good story, but almost every word you used that has a "homonym", you selected the wrong word! You really need an editor (or a better editor).

fare vs. fair, your vs. you're, and many moore (sic). Also, spelling needs work!

Such a sweet, "little" story...

Come on! I couldn't resist! :-)

You come up with some very different ideas in what you write. A fresh take. I am not sure what to say except that the story progressed fine, good build-up, touching romance scene....just...everything was good.

Sincerely, Payenbrant

Small Lady - Large Love

The story line was a surprise after the first few paragraphs, didn't expect romance to be part of the sex. Enjoyable reading.

C'mon...

,,,mom can't snort coke and live the rock star life because of a snot nosed kid but she can fuck him????? Etta James??? OMG... can I boo now??

WOW

Greeeeaat story. Well written and thank you.