He would still have raped her if she was under 18, Im guessing you just included that because of not wanting to depict a scene with a minor, but you could have just as easily left the part about him telling her he was waiting for her to turn 18 out of the story all together, that would never have stopped a slave owner, slaves were there property. Id like to see where this story goes though, its not bad but you could have included a little more
I re read my comment, I didnt mean for it to sound like I wanted there to be a minor in the story, I just meant that that part of the story didnt really fit in with things to me
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He would still have raped her if she was under 18, Im guessing you just included that because of not wanting to depict a scene with a minor, but you could have just as easily left the part about him telling her he was waiting for her to turn 18 out of the story all together, that would never have stopped a slave owner, slaves were there property. Id like to see where this story goes though, its not bad but you could have included a little more
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I re read my comment, I didnt mean for it to sound like I wanted there to be a minor in the story, I just meant that that part of the story didnt really fit in with things to me
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