All Comments on 'Getting Even with Evie'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This was great! Please post more soon.

whywouldiwhywouldiover 11 years ago

Looks promising; I will be looking for follow-ups.

CaedyCaedyover 11 years ago
Good story...

Need more. Look forward to seeing what happens with Evie :)

TiggerscousinTiggerscousinover 11 years ago
Like it!

This is really good. As someone who's not interested in messing around with pants story lines you've got straight on with it but without destroying the suspense. It's quite a gift. I'm waiting for something filthy and possibly a bit dangerous. Loving it! Txxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Great stuff - innovative storyline and - unusually for this site-good English too. Definitely a cut above. More please!

ilasilasalmost 11 years ago
Excellent story!

This is an excellent story so far. I truly hope there will be a follow up on this soon!

Please don't keep us in suspense AltControl!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Okay, well that's a good start...

... but where's the rest of it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just Superb

An excellent introduction. Commercial grade quality

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Holy fucking shit!

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