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This was great! Please post more soon.
Looks promising; I will be looking for follow-ups.
Good story...
Need more. Look forward to seeing what happens with Evie :)
Like it!
This is really good. As someone who's not interested in messing around with pants story lines you've got straight on with it but without destroying the suspense. It's quite a gift. I'm waiting for something filthy and possibly a bit dangerous. Loving it! Txxx
Great stuff - innovative storyline and - unusually for this site-good English too. Definitely a cut above. More please!
Excellent story!
This is an excellent story so far. I truly hope there will be a follow up on this soon!
Please don't keep us in suspense AltControl!!!!
Okay, well that's a good start...
... but where's the rest of it?
Just Superb
An excellent introduction. Commercial grade quality
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