I seem to be leaving the same message all over the place. Too short. I really liked it. Life is too busy to get to the bottom of page one and face disappointment time after time that there is no more. I need to start from the bottom to see how many pages new stories are. Very disappointed it is so short.
You've grabbed my interest because I'm really loving this story. Cole and Melanie will make a hot couple. I agree with the other posters, it's too short but post chapter 2 soon. Good story.
Writing more does take time and sometimes, even I feel anxious to get out a new chapter after 3 weeks of not posting. But I know that my readers would most likely rather read a long chapter thats a little overdue than a short cook up every week. And the only reason we complain about the length is because we love it just that much :) Hahaha, great job nonetheless.
Can't wait to see where this goes though I don't know why Melanie is mad she inserted her own foot in her mouth on that one...lol so I can't even found a fault with Cole who reads as yummy FYI :) but great start can't wait to see what chapter 2 holds and don't feel bad about the short chapter personally I don't care if the length of the story is long or short as long as the author update frequently.
Hey everyone im super sorry that the start of the story is so short .. but after having some intense writers block I feel like i finally came up with a great idea for a story and i have so many more swirling around in my head. However my focus for now is secret lover I will be sure to update frequently because i know how it feels to get so into a story only to see it dosent have the next chapter or the author dosent post new stuff. I am so stoked u guys liked the first chapter and really only posted a one page story to get my feet wet and see how u guys felt about it . Now that I see you enjoy it believe me the next chapter will be nice and juicy . I have the worlds greatest editor !!! so believe me when I say I will definatly post chp.2 before the 20th of this month
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Anonymous08/22/12
New Chapter!
Why aren't you finishing this story :( its got great potential
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Anonymous09/18/12
Loving the lead-in. Hope you post the next chapter soon. The only thing I would recommend is to find a good editor. Other than that, I can't wait to see where your story goes. -DC
Hey everyone I have the second installment to this story ready, it's working its way into editing and soon onto the site. I will be starting a fb page to keep in contact with fans of the story to update you on current submissions as well as new ideas for stories please keep your eyes peeled for secret lover chapter 2
English
love it
Cant wait for the next chapter
Short
I seem to be leaving the same message all over the place. Too short. I really liked it. Life is too busy to get to the bottom of page one and face disappointment time after time that there is no more. I need to start from the bottom to see how many pages new stories are. Very disappointed it is so short.
Good Start!
You've grabbed my interest because I'm really loving this story. Cole and Melanie will make a hot couple. I agree with the other posters, it's too short but post chapter 2 soon. Good story.
I tottally agree with anon 2.
Writing more does take time and sometimes, even I feel anxious to get out a new chapter after 3 weeks of not posting. But I know that my readers would most likely rather read a long chapter thats a little overdue than a short cook up every week. And the only reason we complain about the length is because we love it just that much :) Hahaha, great job nonetheless.
LOVE it already
Can't wait to see where this goes though I don't know why Melanie is mad she inserted her own foot in her mouth on that one...lol so I can't even found a fault with Cole who reads as yummy FYI :) but great start can't wait to see what chapter 2 holds and don't feel bad about the short chapter personally I don't care if the length of the story is long or short as long as the author update frequently.
Got my attention
And I will be coming back for more. Great characters already and I need to see where they will end up.
Gimmie Gimmie Me More (Britney's sing song voice)
I'm interested in reading more, I'm starting to love this story and it's only the first chapter!!!!!!!
OH MY!
great start to your story.. I actually visualize you character and their mannerisms.
Please update soon
Great start so far I am really enjoying this story. Please update soon can't wait to read more.
Can't Wait for More
Omg, this is great. Please don't be stingy w/ the next chapter by making it too short.
I love it you are off to a wonderful start. Melanie you are so stupid I cracked up because I knew that Cole was the new CEO. Excellent!!
get first start and I cant wait to read the next chapter
More
fuel is needed
HEY :)
Hey everyone im super sorry that the start of the story is so short .. but after having some intense writers block I feel like i finally came up with a great idea for a story and i have so many more swirling around in my head. However my focus for now is secret lover I will be sure to update frequently because i know how it feels to get so into a story only to see it dosent have the next chapter or the author dosent post new stuff. I am so stoked u guys liked the first chapter and really only posted a one page story to get my feet wet and see how u guys felt about it . Now that I see you enjoy it believe me the next chapter will be nice and juicy . I have the worlds greatest editor !!! so believe me when I say I will definatly post chp.2 before the 20th of this month
New Chapter!
Why aren't you finishing this story :( its got great potential
Loving the lead-in. Hope you post the next chapter soon. The only thing I would recommend is to find a good editor. Other than that, I can't wait to see where your story goes. -DC
This is a great story I cannot wait until the next chapters. Keep it up
Glen Garry, Glen Ross
Close the deal. (i.e. finish the story, it's got great potential, but that doesn't count for anything until it's finished)
Continue please
Where is the next chapter???
love this!!!
Great start!!! Please continue soon...
More?!?
Hope there is more to come....really liking the story thus far. Please continue....
Hey everyone I have the second installment to this story ready, it's working its way into editing and soon onto the site. I will be starting a fb page to keep in contact with fans of the story to update you on current submissions as well as new ideas for stories please keep your eyes peeled for secret lover chapter 2
https://www.facebook.com/Zombie8Cupckeup
writers page is up and running , take a look and like the page
good start
I love it so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Awesome!
Okay, girl you have caught my interest.....loving it!!!!
WOW!
That was funny
Love it
Very interesting,will read more.
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