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The Holiday Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/13/12

"It smelt horrible, Like she did not clean up after pissing at all, and sweat, With the heat she must have been sweating all morning. She smelt so horrible and yet so incredible at the same time."

Gross, and not just because of the age difference.

ps. "You have lovely breast!" What, just the one?

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by Petermassure08/13/12

Good Story

why do people put comments then dare not leave their name ?

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by Anonymous10/29/16

Take care and take your time.

Not a bad effort considering that English seems not to be your first language. There are several typing/spelling mistakes . Read through the piece very slowly before submitting it. Better still ask a better English speaker/writer to read it for you and correct it. This is called "Proof Reading". Best of luck in the future. M222RJR.

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