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by Anonymous

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by tazz31707/31/12

BY GRANTING AN IMMORTAL DAY

would the morrow change forever, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Ardnas199610/07/12

Interesting perspective

Enjoyed this.

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by Anonymous08/07/13

Oh we'll

Better luck next time eh.
In fact can you please stop now.
Thanks

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by jackog01/11/14

Beautiful and Good

Very well written! I heartily applaud.

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by Maria239406/07/14

well written

and even better, it is honest. Such a thing for anyone, man or woman nowadays! You should be proud of this truly. You set yourself free when you accept yourself and love you despite yourself and what society has "taught" you to believe. Good work!

~ maria2394

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by DonnaBeck08/29/14

interesting

I too am fascinated and repelled by cuckhold. I appreciate you effort to explain the torn feelings. It is not my fetish, but I try to be tolerant and understanding of other people's desires.

It is interesting, the part of feeling like it is deserved. I would like to know more about this.

thanks

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by Anonymous12/08/14

I just threw up!

You would.
I have no doubt.
You would.
pure rubbish, go back to suck the cum from the misses and leave the writing to others

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by Anonymous01/14/15

A Primate's view for a few moments

The touchy-feeling spiritualist, such as the submitter, should consider men and women from the perspective of our being just another Primate. In the wild the Alphas fight off the male contenders and impregnate the choice females. This leaves the contenders with a sense of ' love and protection' toward the female they lost as the group of Primates continue to fend off predators and forage for survival of the community.

Mr. Poet, we are Individual Modern Man. I suggest you grow a set of balls, find a mate whose view of the universe is similar to yours, partner with this individual, and live a productive life as monogamous individuals (or, at least, monogamous while living each sequential polygamous period of time) for the remainder of your life . Good luck to you!

On a technical note, you might consider writing in the iambic pentameter. That is the best poetry style when the complexity of the topic is as baffling as 'cuckolding.' Regards.

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by Anonymous09/20/15

Meh

Meh, what a piece of crap.

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by Anonymous09/21/15

it takes a special man no doubt to watch as another guy pulls it out

very interesting attempt and mostly well written, what got the lynch mob so mad? Of course it is a fetish that borders on scat but who cares. The poet obviously likes his wife to be had, they are mutually glad, he's just too bashful to admit it, but he's a doc and drives a Beamer so all can't be bad ---give us more details doc!

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by Anonymous09/28/16

Gave you 5 stars...

I gave you 5 stars just because I see your favorable comments on the same type of stories I enjoy - but those certainly weren't cuckold stories, so I must admit to some confusion as to why you chose to offer this particular poem. Is cuckolding something you struggle with? Or are you just trying to create a "national anthem" for craven creme pie consumers?

I've scanned a few cuckold stories to try and glean what it is they're so desperately searching for, why they submit to such abject humiliation, pain, and self-abasement. I suppose there are people who actually live that way, but I can't imagine it. Hell, I can't even imagine writing a story like that, let alone consider it a fantasy. The stories I've scanned, and granted, it wasn't many, but they all seemed to be based on the wife humiliating her husband more and more, day by day. Always looking for an even crueler, more humiliating method with which to debase him. As the stories progress, the abuse becomes unthinkable and appalling. Who can possibly enjoy reading this? What kind of mind is capable of fantasizing about such degradation?

I detest seeing someone, anyone, being humiliated against their will; even reading about it makes me angry. Seeing or reading of someone who allows, or in some cases I guess - even enjoys, being humiliated simply turns my stomach. There's already too much pain in the world. Why would someone allow this type of abasement into their lives and do nothing to stop it? I don't understand it, I don't enjoy reading about it, and I won't put up with it.

So - whatever it is you're wrestling with (if the poem is indicative of a personal conflict) - I hope you find your answers soon. Until then, I think you should self-prescribe a strong dose of BTB stories, maybe some romance thrown in for good measure.

Here's MY poem (limerick) to lighten the mood:

An amazing bird is the Pelican.
His mouth can hold more than his belly can.
He can take in his beak, enough food for a week.
I'll be damned if I know how the hell he can!

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by Drbeamer333309/29/16

Well

I have actually thought long and hard about deleting this story. I look back honestly wondering what the hell I was thinking. I do marvel at the effect this site has on the individual readers. I briefly flirted with reading these stories, and dreaming of the hapless cuck coming to his senses. That rarely seemed to happen. Then I simply found myself curious about what could possibly lead someone to this lifestyle. Thank goodness I am too much of a thinker to actually be duped into seriously entertaining this lifestyle. Once I figured out the psychological factors that led guys to become cuckolds, I saw it for what it was. And the women that treat their husbands like this are simply evil. I will keep this here because I find the comments amusing and it stands as a personal testimony of how I was able to rise above. Yes! If you like it, sorry for being brutally honest.

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by Drbeamer333309/29/16

@ Rc68

Am I really that hard on other writers? I have a million ideas to write, but simply too little time as I am currently pursuing a doctorate. I do think you can be critical, and appreciative, of fiction writing, while not being a decent writer. Of course, I do think I am pretty good when it comes to academic writing.

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by tazz31709/29/16

IT IS NOT THAT HE CANT

its just he wont. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Lady_Sith05/01/17

I'll give you credit...

For a well worded and thought out poem. Other that, if you'd have written it as it was dude's choice rather than a question, I think it would have been a lot better.

Thanks for sharing...

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by Anonymous03/20/18

In The Dark!

You said you lved Saxon Hart's story. So 1star for this, and you're addes to my list of horse-shit scribblers who get EVERYTHING 1-starred.

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