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by Anonymous

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Beautiful

I really enjoyed this.

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by clearshooter08/08/12

Excellent! Well Done

I really enjoy your writing. Great story lines, great characters, and wonderful style that just seems to allow the reader to become a part of the action.

How wonderful it was to find this story. I suffered a computer melt down a few months ago, lost all my bookmarks, and have basically been adding them back as I find them on the web. Now, as I have time, I can go back and peruse your stories.

Keep going! Good work. Thanks

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by damnme11/25/13

A very touching story.

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