I really enjoy your writing. Great story lines, great characters, and wonderful style that just seems to allow the reader to become a part of the action.
How wonderful it was to find this story. I suffered a computer melt down a few months ago, lost all my bookmarks, and have basically been adding them back as I find them on the web. Now, as I have time, I can go back and peruse your stories.
Beautiful
I really enjoyed this.
Excellent! Well Done
I really enjoy your writing. Great story lines, great characters, and wonderful style that just seems to allow the reader to become a part of the action.
How wonderful it was to find this story. I suffered a computer melt down a few months ago, lost all my bookmarks, and have basically been adding them back as I find them on the web. Now, as I have time, I can go back and peruse your stories.
Keep going! Good work. Thanks
A very touching story.
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