All Comments on 'Tough Nut to Swallow'

Well written. What happened later?

Great story. I remember the first time I gave a bj just like it happened yesterday. I still like sucking cock. Not to in to the taste any more but, the control you have over a man is wonderfull.

Please share more!

Nicer result! :+))))

Your story shines...because you share your inner dialog with us!

And everything in it is normal and natural.

Your concerns will disappear when Vince returns the favor!

(If he doesn't, you know where to find me! :+))))))))))

Beautifully written, very real story, sexy and engaging. Fabulous start :-)

It's our great good fortune that you decided to try your hand at writing.

This is a very good start. Good story line, well written with completely believable dialog. Five star all the way. Now keep it going, please.

Hi sww....LOL....great first effort and perfect springboard for many more chapters in your "coming (or cumming) of age" saga...... I liked that NOBODY was DDD or 11" or could hold off all night....I am sure many readers could commiserate with your progression and your curiosity and your eagerness..... the well-edited and proofread work makes for MUCH more pleasurable reading too!!

Next chapter??

Hard to believe that this was the author's "virgin" effort (so to speak)

Believable in detail (I'm glad we were spared the 10 inch cock fantasy) and very well paced - but what was her partner in crime doing? Wasn't she supposed to be giving HER boyfriend a blowjob at the same time?

Some problems, like shifting from past-to-present tense early on, and only for a paragraph, some incorrect words here and there, and minor tonal troubles.

Keep writing, get a proofreader, and keep on writing. This was damned near primo stuff.

Thank you everyone for the kind comments! I'm working on another submission that I hope to have finished and online soon!

~SWW

I remember my first one - does anyone ever forget - and this has all the earmarks of being a true tale. Thanks Slippery, let's hear more!

Boy I missed out in high school.

Stories of sexual exploration are my favorites! Nicely done. I hope you'll share more of your adventures with us.

Great first story. Really enjoyed it. Great descriptions of your feelings and reactions. I do hope you will post more. Cheers, Ed

Awesome story and descriptions. I love reading about real life events, or made up stories that seem like they are real life. I hate reading stories that seem like a scene out of a porn movie. Real life is MUCH better than porn and honesty trumps fantasy!

I hope you very first bj was just as eventful as the young lady in the story. I've tried to write some of my first times but not being able to tell that I was fifteen and she was 35 is difficult at best. Check one of my stories and tell me what you think. Billy

Wow - this is great. It's incredibly erotic, mostly because it's so real. You've managed to capture the awkward fumbling of youth in a way that makes the scene come alive, which few writers seem to be able to do. I very rarely post.

I would love for you to continue the story; what about the rest of the bet?

Good story, well told and still pretty sexy. Would love to read more in the series. It definitely has potential!

Someone wearing 28AA bra? And why "we're going to have to do it at some point." So naive! And that mentality for someone supposed to be 18-y-o? They are more like kids of 14. Or was the author really not that naive but merely tried to twist things to fit in with the 18-y-o rule set by Literotica? Well, a good story wasted!

Please keep writing, I love good blow job stories! I would Love a sucking from you!

Very nice story, plausible and realistic. I love the VELOCITY bit.

Keep up the good work.