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Stupid
But good fun!
ROFLMAO!
(whining in my best Andy Rooney voice)
How come; THAT Zed gets a whole nasty story written about him?
And all I get is a nasty assed anony"mouse" troll????
Didn't mean to leave you out Zed0
Ah man, I didn't know you wanted a story for yourself. My bad.
You know Zed...
You started out well and had me listening to you. But then you fell back into the personal attacks and name calling. Bad boy.
I acutally attempted to write you personally but you don't allow messages. So we play this out in the public forum.
If you wrote a story you'd find out that less than 1% of the readers comment at all, even fewer than that comment about the writing. Many only comment on the comments. I'd much rather hear comments on the following which would help me become a better writer (BTW these are my first forays into erotic literature and I'm thinking that having had over 20,000 readers ain't bad) Was the story well written? Did it have substance? Was it consistent in tense throughout? Did it provoke any feelings in the reader? (my writings certainly do the latter!)
If one doesn't like the subject matter, so be it. If you must leave a comment at least be respectful. If you do like the subject, so much the better.
You liked my first story in Loving Wives - 'Waking Up' and your comment there was short and kind so I know you're capable of being nice. Perhaps the choice of Loving Wives as a venue wasn't the right choice, but looking down the list of categories, it was, and still is, the best fit for Aromas and The Process. I'm thinking you prefer Romance and that's cool, it's just not what I write.
So, consider the hatchet buried.
Mr Flabuf
I wish you well. Really Consider the hatchet buried. I hope you get what your looking for. Lastly, You may be right in that some of the content of your stories probably does not belong in LWs but you will find that I am not alone in these thoughts so.... Good Luck
Cute
Anon is NEXT!
A_nonymouse001...
so you're at it again... poor boy. Though I have to say I'm impressed that you found a misspelling without even reading the story. That's some talent you have there. Now, if you'd only found the 47 other correctable errors in this story I'd make you my personal editor.
Oh, but we just don't get along though do we? I wrote a nice story just for you... Hall Monitor, I think you'll like it - probably see a lot of yourself there.
I need to mention that your comment privileges are now revoked on all my stories. You can still vote if you'd like. Perhaps a '1' would be a good place to start. Then when you get that down really well we'll teach you about 2, 3, 4 and even 5.
Good boy cuckold
Cuckold fluff the other two as his wife is used by the other stud. Cuckold loved sucking and tasting their pre cum. And wanted so much to have a load or two pumped into his hungry belly. He could have been ordered to lick his wife clean and swallow it all. That is cuckold heaven and most cuckolds I have seen love it.
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