"... You turned a good story about a son wanting to help his mother feel wanted to a rape story. Good going. Now its just another garbage submission..."
But I thought it was a bit over the top by the way he treated his mother and being so rough with her.
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Anonymous08/07/12
ditto ortsma
This could have been a great story but the rape and submission just destroyed it for me. Incest stories should just be about pure love in my opinion.
by
Anonymous08/07/12
too bad!
you took what could have been a very good continuous story.... and cheapened it. Overweight women have enough difficulty trying to rid themselves of that "less than wanting self", and knocked them down another notch or two by making them think that the only sexual image that they could ever portray, is a "filthy slut". Shame on you... I am sure that you may have a talent for writing. Maybe you can align your thought with something "more romantic, softness, and alot of the special memories that you have hidden in the closet". Nuff Said!
epic story loved it i know some ppl wont like it but the whole raping thing was awesome cause at first she didnt want it then she wants it hell yeah wheres chapter 3?????
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Go get a shrink
You turned a good story about a son wanting to help his mother feel wanted to a rape story. Good going. Now its just another garbage submission.
Continue this series
Great imagery!
Not all mothers appear as models or fitness warriors.
Submissive older mother themes are a more scarce commodity.
5 stars
OH YEAH
Yes I agree Continue this series !!!!!!!!!!!!
But it started so well...
"... You turned a good story about a son wanting to help his mother feel wanted to a rape story. Good going. Now its just another garbage submission..."
Nothing to add.
A good story
But I thought it was a bit over the top by the way he treated his mother and being so rough with her.
ditto ortsma
This could have been a great story but the rape and submission just destroyed it for me. Incest stories should just be about pure love in my opinion.
too bad!
you took what could have been a very good continuous story.... and cheapened it. Overweight women have enough difficulty trying to rid themselves of that "less than wanting self", and knocked them down another notch or two by making them think that the only sexual image that they could ever portray, is a "filthy slut". Shame on you... I am sure that you may have a talent for writing. Maybe you can align your thought with something "more romantic, softness, and alot of the special memories that you have hidden in the closet". Nuff Said!
epic story loved it i know some ppl wont like it but the whole raping thing was awesome cause at first she didnt want it then she wants it hell yeah wheres chapter 3?????
I agree
Garbage!
Total Shit!!!
'Nuff said.
I agree
You totally fucked up what could have been a great story.
tiresome
This could be so good. But you use the terms "slut" and "cunt", which I find objectionable. This is also just barely avoiding being about rape.
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