All Comments on 'Just Relax'

Inventive, creative, a little sly. Not the usual for this category. Five stars.

good start to a story line. needs chapter 2 now with the two of them getting it on

...YES!!!!

[pant], [pant], [pant]...

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five stars...

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MORE, DAMMIT!

You been GONE for 10 years, and you come back for this!?!

5 stars

WELCOME BACK!!

The story is great. A simple as it is, you can see the changes in Mel as she "relaxes". Welcome back!

Not degrading or some bimbofication that too many authors do. Thanks.

I enjoyed it. I like hypno stories...looking forward to more.

I admire this soft and quiet, yet magical creation. My bride of 49 years and I share a long-standing family homestead (64 years is a long time for N Texas, rural Dallas) on this modestly chilling Sunday afternoon ... watching the BBC series "The Queens Palaces". My visual attention to the televised British treasures repeatedly drifted away to resolve the wonder of knowing where your well-crafted seduction of Mel leads her. To date, you've given Pat a more than humane ability to keep his talents guided toward expanding her awakening without humiliation. Will it continue? I'll be sharing this tale with my bride and we will be checking back for further progress in Pat's intentions and what new directions he takes. You've begun a fantasy to equal the entertainment value of a BBC production. Thank You.

Tony Clarke. Aka. nellabarely2 on Literotica

dynakid1@yahoo.com

Why did she not want to have him while fully aware?

So. Close to reality!