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The Blood Slave Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by kinky01908/07/12

More!!!!!!!!!

I need more! I'll be checking for updates

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by Anomandaris08/08/12

Good start!

Interesting premise. Nice to see some 'not so nice' vampires for a change. I hope you continue to explore the bdsm elements. Looking forward to the next installement.

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by lollapalooza08/08/12

Chapter 2 is coming soon!

Thanks for all the glorious feedback, and the high ratings. Very nice.

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by DemonicWings11/14/13

This felt really rushed

It's a good story and I really like it, but maybe you could redo it and slow down and go through the thoughts and feelings not to mention actions penny and Draco are going through

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by jott5009/18/14

good , but it needs to flow better

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