All Comments on 'Aquatic Erotica'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hahahaha

"let's pick up a couple of submarine sandwiches"

"I had acquired a substantial erection"

"the evaporation will have a cooling effect on our bodies"

Hahaha do you and your wife actually talk like that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ditto

actually, I thought the mannered speech patterns were intentionally humorous, and added to my enjoyment of the story. lol

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