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Sexy Start!!****
Thanks for sharing looking forward to chapter two!
Nice
Cant wait to see how she Finishes him.
hope
this doesn't turn out to be cheating wife setting him up to accept it.
yeah, I hope so too.
that this doesn't turn into another cuckfest fable
Likely a cluck story developing.
Amazing low scores.
SO FAR SO GOOD
a wide open story with plenty of angles for more chapters, TK U MLJ LV NV
The sequel
She fuck with her boss,co-worker and clients while on business trip and she a cheap skate-couldn't pay for her mother's house painting: and "Darling it was just sex and I still love you"-same line Kristen Stewart used.
Well Deserved or Not
If this becomes a cuckold story, then your low scores are well deserved because you gave us no warning at the beginning. But if it does not, then your low scores are very undeserved as your writing is erotic.
Not a cuckhold story
Not sure why thats the thought. The rest has not been written, but definently not a cheating wife story. Glad some liked it for now.
stupid comments
Nothing in this really great story suggested cuck??? Why such low scores for s story that deserves 5's?
Wrong category, dude.
Uh, this story really should have been put in Erotic Couplings, there was nothing romantic AT ALL about this story.
Re: The Category
I feel confident the category I chose was "Loving Wives". Perhaps the editors decided that was not a good category and stuck in "Romance". Or perhaps i did that by accident, but i dont think so. Anyway, if your offended by the category, sorry.
And BTW, to the anonymous person who wrote me an email saying they gave it a "1" because the title didnt say it was part 1, wow... That is a harsh rule.
Incomplete
But good enough for 3***
Editing would have helped
A story with a lot of potential but it read rough. My own feeling, if you spent time editing the story I would have given it a 5* instead of 3*
Check out the newest parts
If anyone who read before, especially the commenters who were interested in the other parts, parts 2 is out and 3 should be up soon. Not a cuckold story at all.
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