All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

Thanks for sharing looking forward to chapter two!

Cant wait to see how she Finishes him.

this doesn't turn out to be cheating wife setting him up to accept it.

that this doesn't turn into another cuckfest fable

Amazing low scores.

a wide open story with plenty of angles for more chapters, TK U MLJ LV NV

She fuck with her boss,co-worker and clients while on business trip and she a cheap skate-couldn't pay for her mother's house painting: and "Darling it was just sex and I still love you"-same line Kristen Stewart used.

If this becomes a cuckold story, then your low scores are well deserved because you gave us no warning at the beginning. But if it does not, then your low scores are very undeserved as your writing is erotic.

Not sure why thats the thought. The rest has not been written, but definently not a cheating wife story. Glad some liked it for now.

Nothing in this really great story suggested cuck??? Why such low scores for s story that deserves 5's?

Uh, this story really should have been put in Erotic Couplings, there was nothing romantic AT ALL about this story.

I feel confident the category I chose was "Loving Wives". Perhaps the editors decided that was not a good category and stuck in "Romance". Or perhaps i did that by accident, but i dont think so. Anyway, if your offended by the category, sorry.

And BTW, to the anonymous person who wrote me an email saying they gave it a "1" because the title didnt say it was part 1, wow... That is a harsh rule.

But good enough for 3***

A story with a lot of potential but it read rough. My own feeling, if you spent time editing the story I would have given it a 5* instead of 3*

If anyone who read before, especially the commenters who were interested in the other parts, parts 2 is out and 3 should be up soon. Not a cuckold story at all.