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An Early Morning Encounter

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by Anonymous08/08/12

perfect

i always read the new posts. rarely find one so good written as this one. this is truly erotic. thank you.

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by Anonymous08/09/12

Just being picky.

Very good, I liked it. Just noted that a favourite word of yours is mutter. Author quirks can sometimes get in the way of a storyline. I really liked it, as the rest was well written, though at times a 'his' was written as 'him'. These are just thinks that a grammar nerd shirks at. Great job though :)

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by Anonymous08/09/12

I'm hard now.

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by Anonymous08/11/12

perfectly written

Makes me yern for a guy like this :p

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