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Young Woman with Older Man Ch. 12

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by Anonymous

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by ausman4608/08/12

This is becoming familiar

If the mother eventually turns up then we have an absolute repeat of a Literotica story of 4 or 5 years back. The girls, the rough boyfriend, the girl's beaten best friend, the trip home, the car accident, the dream of love at the time of death, the little sister, and the women's love of nudity.......It's becoming all too familiar.

Great story just the same.

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by SusanJillParker08/08/12

BostonFictionWriter

This story was written by BostonFictionWriter in 2007. I am BostonFictionWriter. This is my story. I own the copyright to this story.

With permission from the owner of the site, Laurel, so long as I removed the original story from my BostonFictionWriter page, I was granted permission to rewrite the story. Further, it is my intention to release this as an e-Book.

As far as I can see is this is a win/win for my fans.

To the reader below, I'm glad you enjoyed the story enough to remember it. I hope you voted. Now, please don't spoil the story for everyone else (lol).

Susan

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by Wyldewoodman08/08/12

great story

This is keeping me on the edge. While I was reading I could put myself in Freddie's place I was getting aroused. I could visually see Gwen. I was wanting her as much as Freddy was.
Keep up the great work Susan Pleassseeeeeee!
I guess being an older man just makes it that much more lovely. A good man knows how to take his time.
Awaiting the Next installment.

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by PaBob08/09/12

Oh God She's gonna barf!

Thanks Susan for keeping me right on the edge. And the thoughts of Mom and even GrandMom having the same genes got me so hard....What a tease you are. Please continue

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by PaBob08/09/12

Ebook?

Awesome! an ebook!

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by Oz199908/09/12

Hooked

It looks like you have us hooked, you naughty lady. Great fantasy unfolding here.

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