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by Anonymous

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by tazz31708/06/12

PARLEY VOUX FRANCEY

chevorolet coupe.....Thats it. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Senna Jawa08/12/12

Write more

Be careful, the phrase "eating...your wine" doesn't sound good. Sure. I understand. But poetry is the art of words.

This poem is already pretty good. Try harder.

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