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Shit!
Boring as fuck & should be deleted ASAP.
delete it
Delete it it sucked
ditto previous comments
This site is called Lit"erotica" for a reason. There's absolutely nothing erotic about smelling someone's shit.
You may need some mental health counseling if you think your story is erotic.
Attention to this story's tags is pertinent
I'm not going to say this story doesn't belong on Literotica, but there are some fringe fetishes at play in this short and up front warning would be nice. This is more a request that Literotica relocate story tags to somewhere before the narrative begins. This story has its place, but not exactly my cup of tea.
I am completely appauled!!!
I can't believe that things like this get published! It's a hideous affront to Erotica that something this degraded could be found on this site!!! The lack of warning and the fact that this isn't firmly in the bottom of the "Fetish" category is disgusting. I am not arguing that this is incest of a kind, but it is FAR more "Fetish" than anything else. Disgraceful!!!
Thanks but no thanks
Well, I asked for a grandma story and I got it. Try it without the shit next time. I'm a pervert, not a psycho.
I liked it!
Can't wait for Ch. 02
These guys need to shut up and realize other people have their own fetishes. Keep on writing!
no help needed
The guy writing this story,does not need help...In other words the writer,needs to be shot!!!!!
Yes!
Excellent, erotic story
GIve us a warning
Scat might be what you and some other people enjoy but a vast majority of people don't. A warning at the start of the story would be appreciated. I know for a fact I won't be reading any more of the work because of this.
Hilarious
I started laughing about halfway through this, and just couldn't stop. The most absurd thing I've read in a while.
Shit.
Is an apt description of this diatribe.
Lighten up you bunch of s/righteous old maids
Ok so not everyone likes this type of story. Move on then.
I thought it was unusual but still well written. Obviously by the reaction to the realism.
Suck it up you pompous arsed ppl.
This isn't a site for the innocent, so stop kidding yourself.
Also why not comment with a name
Nope
Shit stinks. Period. That's why we flush it and clean ourselves afterward. It is bacteria-ridden, foul, excrement that our body is expelling from our bowels. There is nothing redeeming about shit. That's why we dispose of it. Obsession with shit, scat, etc. is a mental illness, not an appropriate sexual "fetish."
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