Closer Than Ever

Less Talk, More Sex

This could have been much better.

I'm astounded!!

Now that you are sixty one your brother is STILL five years younger than you?
To quote - "Today, I'm sixty-one and he's still the same five years younger at fifty-six."
Wow!! How come he didn't get older quicker than you??

Crap

I would try wanking not writing if you could find it

I enjoyed it completely . For a simple one pg quick story, I think it laid out the story just fine and it only needed the one sex scene to tell the love story that also told how 5 years later they were still together and in love. ty for a great read.

Middle Age?

Two Points:

I like your story.

How many people is 122 years old?

Good short story

This type of situation can work for many mature people. It is mutually beneficial and can be fun.

Wasnt really into it sorry to say

First, they are ancient and imagining all those old body parts and furry gray haired pussies is blearrghh, and I'm 34 and it's STILL kinda gross to me. Though I do understand older people might like it.

Second, no middle aged chick is still "tight like a high schooler" even if she didn't have kids.Tight, maybe, if she was married to a man that wasn't that big. But tight like a high schooler? I just don't buy it.

Third, time is not going to make someone NOT feel like your sibling anymore. If anything I think it should be the other way around. They've now been your sibling your whole lengthy life.

I just don't buy it on the whole, and all the talking was not hot. "Let's do some real incest." Yeah, because someone would ever say that in real life.

Chilly

Your story left me cold.

Thanks Wayne

Another great story, a great read, keep em cummin