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by Anonymous

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by Pistolpackinpete08/10/12

Guys got bad luck with beasts...

...hard to comment with just this....

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by Anonymous08/10/12

intriguing...

I rated five stars because you write enjoyably. I hope to see a continuation... in fact I look forward to it.

Thanks, Jane Marwood

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by Bakedbeankid08/10/12

Loved It

Aksana has topped my sexy vampire / succubus list. Lots more chapters please

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by Wolfblackthorne08/10/12

thank you to those that commented

Thank you for the comments! I am so happy you loved my story. Will be putting out a second chapter soon. Thank you very much for the kind support.

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by Anonymous08/11/12

Good value

Wow where does he shop, only 8.25 for two packs of beef, noodles and spag sauce!

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by jonmartin2208/11/12

nice one!

I hope you keep on going..

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by Anonymous08/12/12

wonderful-next part please

enjoyed reading it very much.. awaiting the next part.. wanna knw what happens next :)

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by Wolfblackthorne08/26/12

thanks

thanks for the support and favs. this makes writing even more enjoyable knowing some one enjoys it. part 2 is up.. enjoy!

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by Warfolomei09/05/12

O.O

Somehow I found this story a bit cute. Good job. Happy to see a second chapter.

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by Anonymous11/30/12

Mistress wanted me to comment on this

This was, I have to admit, pretty damn hot and extremely well-written. I enjoyed it.

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by jenndoll12/06/12

very good read

very descriptive, felt like i could completely picture it. Could see the submission happening and the helplessness. Really good read

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by Anonymous12/07/12

Compeling and Disturbingly Erotic

I was asked to look this story over and I have to say it was damn good: well written with a good narrative. The most striking thing was the heavy sense of the eroticism of control that pervades it.

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by Anonymous12/19/12

So gets to me in a good way :)

Shivers... Totally love it, and look forward to reading the other chapters :)

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by Anonymous04/13/13

very nice

very well done i love the detail. paints a very vivd picture in my mind

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by Anonymous08/08/13

Very good

I like it

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by Anonymous09/21/13

great read

he writes well very good story

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by Anonymous10/17/13

A Good Start

Its an impressive start to a story.. Really good. :)

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by Anonymous01/15/14

well done

I don't often read horror, but this story is written so pictorial that it's easy to imagine the situation, the feelings and the mixture of fear and attraction.
I particularly liked the description of hypnotic effects :)
And... what happened to his wounds...? I have to read chapter 2

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