All Comments on 'In The Haze'

Good first story, maybe to build on the Non Consent theme she may not keep to her word next time and may need to go over his knee !!

more on what was in her head. Smell of the cock, shame, sore jaw, maybe choking on the cum

bit short,but good

I am turned on, this story is hot. The descriptions are what put me right there in the scene. I like the originality of your story, and it amuses me to think that this probably happens fairly often in real life.

The incongruity of their age/class/manner of dress is interesting also.

Usually blowjob scenes are not as interesting nor realistic as yours, I enjoyed that..

It goes without saying I want more.

This is a very good blowjob scene. And having him force the immediacy of her choices is very well played

GingerVy's comment hit the nail on the head. The class/age/power difference is great, and there aren't enough stories about little art students getting violated. I'd love to see more and learn how far Haze will go for an exhibition, and I agree with Anonymous below that more description of what goes on in her head would improve your writing even further. Thanks for sharing!