All Comments on 'Tell Me I Can Hope'

This story is a perfect finish to "Prom date." I could ALMOST see the culmination as the first story ended, this one "fleshed it out."

great story.very human and written with great emotion.i am now going to read all the rest of your stories

Nice finale to Prom Date. Tied up the ends nicely and in a romantic fashion (which I love.) I'm glad she made up with him in a more initimate manner than she had in the Prom Date. Nicely done.

...on both stories.

It's good to see these two work things out.

It's gentle, its humorous, and it's erotic. what more could a reader ask ?

I think that they can't keep improving, but again I am wrong. This one was very romantic, and I really felt glad for the couple because it mirrors real life in many ways. The sex and descriptions of it were also very good and many of the expressions that were repeated over and over in earlier stories such as "hard as pebbles" are missing and more variety in expression is present. Not that the repetitions were bad, especially if one only read one story and then moved on to other authors, but when one reads all that an author produces, the use of the same descriptions leaves little to the imagination even though the stories themselves are quite different. Sex is sex, one might say, but Alex now seems to have progressed to the point where there is much variation, and that makes his submissions that much more enjoyable. In these stories we all realize that the sex is important, but Alex makes it much more; his stories make the reader want to read for the plot, for the people involved, and the sex makes it so much better. Thanks, Alex. Now an aside, Alex. You have mentioned that some of your stories were withdrawn for an anthology. Hopefully, you have been able to make some money from your efforts. Are the published works available? Why not put that in your Bio?

just close your eyes and dream of tomorrow. TK U MLJ LV NV

If only that lonely teacher could find someone as well. Maybe she starts dating again after Jim leaves? Maybe the first few dates don't work out/meet her expectations?

Perfection in two pages... I don't think there is anything about this story that I would like to change.

yes its me and I am in lust again. TK U MLJ LV NV

i really appreciate the sequel. it is great.

it is so much better to know how these two arrived at this point. It makes their reunion so much more meaningful.

Great story!

This is such a wonderful piece of work! It could have gotten a full 5 stars if not for the fact that it is slightly hurried. You could have built the relationship a bit more slowly instead of fuck at first sight! Other than that, the text is well written and I enjoyed it a lot. Kudos mate!!!

I am glad to see that you have given us a follow up story that was a very nice read!

I didn’t understand how, or why, Cheryl and Catherine are one and the same person. Then I remembered that this story is a sequel. And I didn’t read the first part. Oh well. Had I, I probably would have enjoyed this story more.

I enjoyed it. confusing for sure (why the breakup? maybe I missed it) and only an Erotic Coupling story, but good.

Good read

Thank you for finishing that story. Nicely done.