I can honestly say I am really really liking it so far, its a bit windy in some area's, mainly in that you seem to try and explain the same thing different ways (it seems as an attempt at different prospectives, but it ultimately becomes the same thing just said differently), however, I like it
Please continue, and please dont let anything drastic happen to the reunited couple... I detest storys that get them back together and then murder one or both of them off in the next instance...
Excellent Start!! I was hoping for these two xDD Like i said on the first one: So long as babies are healthy, love is love. And seriously, demons, escpecially magic demons, aint gotta follow silly human rules of tradition or genetics xDD
Even genetically, humans who are born to siblings have very little chance of developing any genetic abnormalities; the main reason for the taboo surround it is that people of the opposite sex whom we grow up with do not, (for some evolutionary reason, I would suspect), appeal to us sexually.
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Anonymous09/07/13
there was a comment.......
I cannot remember who or where but I read a comment about your people in the story were flat with no descriptiveness of each person you wrote about......I feel this is wrong for I see a picture of each one that you describe......thank you
English
well then...
I can honestly say I am really really liking it so far, its a bit windy in some area's, mainly in that you seem to try and explain the same thing different ways (it seems as an attempt at different prospectives, but it ultimately becomes the same thing just said differently), however, I like it
Please continue, and please dont let anything drastic happen to the reunited couple... I detest storys that get them back together and then murder one or both of them off in the next instance...
The spicy story
Excellent Start!! I was hoping for these two xDD Like i said on the first one: So long as babies are healthy, love is love. And seriously, demons, escpecially magic demons, aint gotta follow silly human rules of tradition or genetics xDD
actually...
Even genetically, humans who are born to siblings have very little chance of developing any genetic abnormalities; the main reason for the taboo surround it is that people of the opposite sex whom we grow up with do not, (for some evolutionary reason, I would suspect), appeal to us sexually.
there was a comment.......
I cannot remember who or where but I read a comment about your people in the story were flat with no descriptiveness of each person you wrote about......I feel this is wrong for I see a picture of each one that you describe......thank you
A sweet reunion
I can see that I will be staying - sex or no - for the very enjoyable characters.
Jason
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