All Comments on 'The Sculptor and his Muse Ch. 01'

by EelunPhetmoore

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
nice

a-museing

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Can't wait for the sculptures!!!!

So erotic...!!! So well written. Can't wait for the continuation... Thanks for sharing!

EelunPhetmooreEelunPhetmooreover 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks so much for the kind words everybody. I'm almost finished with Chapter Two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
sensual

Loved it :) you had me imagining the warmth and smells, right down to wet clay and other wet parts....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Write about what you know.

An interesting concept ruined by painful ignorance about sculpting in clay or female orgasm.

EelunPhetmooreEelunPhetmoorealmost 6 years agoAuthor
Painful Ignorance

What an insightful response "anonymous."

I feel I was pretty spot on with my knowledge of clay and sculpting. I've been it doing most of my life and it seems to be working out for me pretty well but maybe you've been doing it longer and I should bow to your superiority.

Sorry, you've never experienced an orgasm like the female in this story, that must mean no one ever has.

It's such a relief you took the time to write a useful critique instead of leaving useless insults with no explanation.

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